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2/4/2012 c1 ceo55
Its hard to review a single chapter in a story that is AU, now it is good well thought out chapter and has potential to be a good story! So that said next chapter please!

ceo55
2/4/2012 c1 3Nightmare Sired Muse
I've seen a few people try, this story, I hope you dont drop like many others have.
2/4/2012 c1 loginanout
It was an okay start. You can inprove. I look forward to you becomeing a better writer.
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