for Sacrificial Second Chance6/9/2016 c1 Ttnln12
This is a great story that should be continued if anyone wants to continue this PM me cause I have an idea ciao for now
This is a great story that should be continued if anyone wants to continue this PM me cause I have an idea ciao for now
5/29/2016 c19 Guest
This was a good story... Right up till this chapter. Half way through I feel as if I had just wasted my time reading it. I am not happy with the sister angle but to the author their own. But to put this... Chapter. I'm done with it!
This was a good story... Right up till this chapter. Half way through I feel as if I had just wasted my time reading it. I am not happy with the sister angle but to the author their own. But to put this... Chapter. I'm done with it!
5/28/2016 c20 Tangere peripher
you know...you say you finish your storys and dont give up on them yet you have to finish a single one of them...i would love to see this story continued or adopted by somebody else if you dont plan on ending it
you know...you say you finish your storys and dont give up on them yet you have to finish a single one of them...i would love to see this story continued or adopted by somebody else if you dont plan on ending it
5/21/2016 c25 MikeyBlue
is there ever going to be a chapter 26 well that's another story that you've given up on?
is there ever going to be a chapter 26 well that's another story that you've given up on?
5/16/2016 c25 Guest
someone please adopt this story!
someone please adopt this story!
5/14/2016 c25 everrock
i have no idea why you have abandoned this story or even stopped writing but this story had lots of potential
i have no idea why you have abandoned this story or even stopped writing but this story had lots of potential
5/12/2016 c11 SkepsisFF
may i point out that tonks is still in SCHOOL. And in about 5th or 6th year at that. You're rushing the Remus/Tonks relationship. Remus is a man about twice her age. He should not be jealous of an 11 year old HUGGING a fifth year even if he has a silver tongue. You could have waited a bit to actually make it a bit realistic nd believable but by rushing this you ve actually just made their relationship a screwed up mess from the start. Just something i dont think you gave much thought to when u wrote this.
may i point out that tonks is still in SCHOOL. And in about 5th or 6th year at that. You're rushing the Remus/Tonks relationship. Remus is a man about twice her age. He should not be jealous of an 11 year old HUGGING a fifth year even if he has a silver tongue. You could have waited a bit to actually make it a bit realistic nd believable but by rushing this you ve actually just made their relationship a screwed up mess from the start. Just something i dont think you gave much thought to when u wrote this.
5/4/2016 c25 
1Marczeg Szar
I really like this story and now it seems its abandoned when it's getting interesting.
So Please, could someone, preferably with writing experience, adopt and continue this story?
Marczeg Szar
1Marczeg SzarI really like this story and now it seems its abandoned when it's getting interesting.
So Please, could someone, preferably with writing experience, adopt and continue this story?
Marczeg Szar
4/11/2016 c20 Ellimist01
Well I won't say I accept what happened in since chapter 18 until now, I can admit that the way you handled it out was a good one. Especially since it coincided with my complaint of Harry's actions and doing everything alone.
Well I won't say I accept what happened in since chapter 18 until now, I can admit that the way you handled it out was a good one. Especially since it coincided with my complaint of Harry's actions and doing everything alone.
4/11/2016 c19 Ellimist01
Seems like the author is trying to chase away his readers. A whole succession of events hapeneing one after another making it seem he is trying to hard to make it seem dramatic. Honestly I hate it when authors force drama and fight scenes when things could have been handled much easier. And another issue is how fast things have developed. Ignoring the fact that god had three chances where he could have told Harry about this there is also Harry's stupidity and wanting to do things alone that could have gotten his family killed. If he had told his family the truth rather than lie about 'the dream' things would have been much simpler, but as I said the author is forcing drama too hard. And as for 'the dream' I still don't know how they bought it. Seriously that version of Harry Potter probably had a fantasy about that actually happening with how much he craved killing and causing others pain and you expect anyone with sense to believe what would be his fantasy to not only change him, but to that extent? I blame the author's failing for such a bad chapter but I hope he didn't suddenly change how writes and things continue in this manner.
Seems like the author is trying to chase away his readers. A whole succession of events hapeneing one after another making it seem he is trying to hard to make it seem dramatic. Honestly I hate it when authors force drama and fight scenes when things could have been handled much easier. And another issue is how fast things have developed. Ignoring the fact that god had three chances where he could have told Harry about this there is also Harry's stupidity and wanting to do things alone that could have gotten his family killed. If he had told his family the truth rather than lie about 'the dream' things would have been much simpler, but as I said the author is forcing drama too hard. And as for 'the dream' I still don't know how they bought it. Seriously that version of Harry Potter probably had a fantasy about that actually happening with how much he craved killing and causing others pain and you expect anyone with sense to believe what would be his fantasy to not only change him, but to that extent? I blame the author's failing for such a bad chapter but I hope he didn't suddenly change how writes and things continue in this manner.
4/10/2016 c1 Ellimist01
Hmmm I'm impressed. It's the first time I've seen the the 7th year final confrontation between Harry and Tom end in this manner. Lol J.K.R's ended it with stupid wandlore, but this which shows a Harry not strong enough to beat Voldemort but does so by tricking him actually impressed me. Though I must say unless you change Ron's character there is no way I'd want to see him end up with Hermione. Nothing against Ron but Hermione could do a whole lot better than a guy who is constantly jealous of others and would abandon his friends when they were searching for Horcruxes because his best friend in number one in Riddle's shit list. I have nothing against Ron and nobody is perfect but like I said, Hermione can do a whole lot better than him.
Hmmm I'm impressed. It's the first time I've seen the the 7th year final confrontation between Harry and Tom end in this manner. Lol J.K.R's ended it with stupid wandlore, but this which shows a Harry not strong enough to beat Voldemort but does so by tricking him actually impressed me. Though I must say unless you change Ron's character there is no way I'd want to see him end up with Hermione. Nothing against Ron but Hermione could do a whole lot better than a guy who is constantly jealous of others and would abandon his friends when they were searching for Horcruxes because his best friend in number one in Riddle's shit list. I have nothing against Ron and nobody is perfect but like I said, Hermione can do a whole lot better than him.
4/4/2016 c25 kc black
Fleur iris Daphne and Alice
Fleur iris Daphne and Alice
3/28/2016 c25 anonima 314
I have just read your history(story) in one breath and I owes attorney that I find her(it) brilliant I hope sincerely that would find you the inspiration to continue her(it) màlgrés the fact that his(her,its) fact three years when you have no poster watch to excuse me hens fault but I use a translation software to send you this message of encouragement
I have just read your history(story) in one breath and I owes attorney that I find her(it) brilliant I hope sincerely that would find you the inspiration to continue her(it) màlgrés the fact that his(her,its) fact three years when you have no poster watch to excuse me hens fault but I use a translation software to send you this message of encouragement
3/10/2016 c4 Tony McNucklz
Personally I can't read stories where major decisions are made by polls and review suggestions. it just smacks of sloppy writing and lack of forethought for your story, and I have never read a story with no plan that didn't go completely cross-eyed eventually. I'll check your other work, but I can't keep going with this one.
Personally I can't read stories where major decisions are made by polls and review suggestions. it just smacks of sloppy writing and lack of forethought for your story, and I have never read a story with no plan that didn't go completely cross-eyed eventually. I'll check your other work, but I can't keep going with this one.