for Sacrificial Second Chance3/1/2015 c25 Tarix
A nice story so far, Karma was too deus ex machina, good that you wrote him out of the story. Characters are nice, i found your interpretation of Daphne's character rather original. It would be rather interesting to see how you will make the harem work with all the possessive girls.
A nice story so far, Karma was too deus ex machina, good that you wrote him out of the story. Characters are nice, i found your interpretation of Daphne's character rather original. It would be rather interesting to see how you will make the harem work with all the possessive girls.
2/16/2015 c25 saint21
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Are you gonna have Harry accept the trip to Japan to do a time skip or something? Daphne is one of my favorite caracter in this story btw
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Are you gonna have Harry accept the trip to Japan to do a time skip or something? Daphne is one of my favorite caracter in this story btw
2/16/2015 c25 kumar
what a desulting story. Alot of ideas all over the place
what a desulting story. Alot of ideas all over the place
2/12/2015 c25 
2Antor2001
I can stand a cliffhanger, I can hope for updates after almost 2 years, but reading right after a cliffhanger "From here on out in the story things are going to be moving fast" is just brutal. It kills me to not know what could have been :(
2Antor2001I can stand a cliffhanger, I can hope for updates after almost 2 years, but reading right after a cliffhanger "From here on out in the story things are going to be moving fast" is just brutal. It kills me to not know what could have been :(
2/8/2015 c25 Niet boeiend
I starter reading the story cause a friend recommended it. Now I could care less about the harem and I don't really like the incest but apart from that I absolutely love the story it's a shame you abandoned it for now but I really hope that you'll get back to it soon.
I starter reading the story cause a friend recommended it. Now I could care less about the harem and I don't really like the incest but apart from that I absolutely love the story it's a shame you abandoned it for now but I really hope that you'll get back to it soon.
1/29/2015 c1 Guest
Update please!
Update please!
1/28/2015 c25 Blood Wine and Song
As much as the story is slow progressing I came to enjoy quite a lot by the end of this chapter. Its very AU and thats why I like it, besides being well written of course.
Hopefully you will come back to finish it. its very disappointing that not only you havent updated in a long time but you didnt specify the reason.
Cheers.
As much as the story is slow progressing I came to enjoy quite a lot by the end of this chapter. Its very AU and thats why I like it, besides being well written of course.
Hopefully you will come back to finish it. its very disappointing that not only you havent updated in a long time but you didnt specify the reason.
Cheers.
1/26/2015 c7 Blood Wine and Song
"Those of you who want to see Hermione and Fleur dont worry, they have nice pairing's in the future."
Not that I wanted them paired with Harry, not Hermione at least. But that got to be the stupidest statement I have read this year.
The story has good potential, you dont see dimension hopping in HP fanficion that much. So far the execution is less then I thought it would be.
Still reading.
"Those of you who want to see Hermione and Fleur dont worry, they have nice pairing's in the future."
Not that I wanted them paired with Harry, not Hermione at least. But that got to be the stupidest statement I have read this year.
The story has good potential, you dont see dimension hopping in HP fanficion that much. So far the execution is less then I thought it would be.
Still reading.
1/18/2015 c25 Anonymously me
As someone who has just found this story and finished reading what has been posted here on this site I'm curiouse as to why the author has seemingly abandond it as it is a remarkable work of fiction and I encourage the author to continue.
If it is Bering continued on a different site I would love to know where the rest is posted as I feel an overwhelming need to read more.
As someone who has just found this story and finished reading what has been posted here on this site I'm curiouse as to why the author has seemingly abandond it as it is a remarkable work of fiction and I encourage the author to continue.
If it is Bering continued on a different site I would love to know where the rest is posted as I feel an overwhelming need to read more.
1/18/2015 c1 19Smiling Seshat
I think you should go back to the first chapters of your story and edit them. There are quite a few mistakes you should take care of, especially punctuation.
19Smiling SeshatI think you should go back to the first chapters of your story and edit them. There are quite a few mistakes you should take care of, especially punctuation.