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10/26/2013 c25 regfurby
I've gotten so used to the story being mostly angsty/romance/self-discovery that the sudden messy battle with heavy casualties at the end seems rather jarring.

I mean, really, Voldemort's not even fully back and he's willing to burn down an inn in a popular location using Fiendfyre, thereby announcing to the entire world and all the shady organizations that something's wrong? Pretty bold of the Death Eaters...

The incest may drive people off, but it also reeled me and others in. Just block the people flaming you for the incest and they'll go back to flaming slash fics for writing slash or something, I suppose.

Speaking of slash, Snape's history with James is intriguing. And how ironic it is for Harry to once again resemble the person Snape hates most... Looking forward to the unravelling of that particular mystery.

I hope this story treats Harry well, he's already went through enough shit in his life and to go through yet more pain, suffering and loss here is just mean. Hopefully there'll be less innocents suffering too. Harry's no longer alone, so I believe the story should focus more on what he's able to achieve with his new allies rather than how little having new allies makes a difference to his usual state of suffering.

Pairings are fine, harem is fine, just make Harry care for any girl that returns the feelings. It's his new life, he should get to experience the things he's never gotten to experience before, and part of that experience is being able to care for a large number of females while maintaining the peace. Harry's a unique person, and his relationships with girls don't even have to be sexual, just loving.
10/20/2013 c1 XxMoixX
Weird...
10/14/2013 c25 Guest
Well... im still waiting for the update. Checking everyday. maybe just maybe the chapter would be here :P Im really waiting for so much. I know the chapter will be amazing, cause really your an amaazing writer. :) but the wait is long. I say ill check in a month, but i know ill be checking tomorrow again XD and the next and the next. :D
10/11/2013 c19 Guest
it was good until the whole Royce necro thing then Harry was to out of character
10/10/2013 c2 Guest
Make him a metamorphmagus
10/10/2013 c11 hanshi711
What doesn't jibe in your story of Harry having some of the feelings left over from his former self. His soul was removed and what was left was just his body. Harry had his soul put into the old Harry's body so there should have been no strings attached to this body that Harry inherited.
10/10/2013 c8 hanshi711
Author you don't call boys beautiful, unless maybe your gay!
10/10/2013 c6 hanshi711
I can't understand how the original Harry could have been so dark coming from a loving family.
10/9/2013 c2 hanshi711
I think being able to turn into a shadow leopard and move through the shadows.
10/4/2013 c25 3doubledamn
OH COME ON! YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT FOR & MONTHS!? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!?
10/4/2013 c22 doubledamn
You really like cliffhangers don't you? Or pseudo ones at any rate.
10/4/2013 c21 doubledamn
I really like the way Harry did the duel. It seems he is one for unexpected strategy, especially in society that is, to put it bluntly, lazier than the American stereotype.
10/4/2013 c20 doubledamn
Good. Explaining how he apparated inside Hogwarts might be a bit difficult.
10/4/2013 c19 doubledamn
COME ON! Can't you just let him be happy? Why do you do this to the poor boy? Force feed him Veritaseum and let everyone decide what the hell to do to him.
10/4/2013 c18 doubledamn
Ohhh Shit.
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