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10/4/2013 c15 3doubledamn
Oh GOD. You got Snape to like JAMES instead of Lily didn't you? That is...evil. Nice job.
10/4/2013 c14 doubledamn
At first my comments of "Neville the Malfoy" were little more than a joke based on what Kar said, but they seem a lot more accurate than I thought they would be. If anything Neville seems to be more Malfoy than Malfoy - that self entitled little s#it.
10/4/2013 c13 doubledamn
Okay I really like Katie in this.

But there is one thing I will like even more...This Harry's actions to Gilderoy Lockheart. He probably won't come after Harry this time, and "Neville the Malfoy" will most likely want his help. But I really want someone to punch that guy in the mouth hard enough to knock out those damn teeth that he's so proud of. Then take a photo and send it in to Witch Weekly's Most Charming Smile Award.
10/4/2013 c12 doubledamn
Dragon Patronus! DRAGON PATRONUS!

Are you sure you can't add Hermonie to the harem? Not only are the intelligence things closer than before but the pairing shorthand is just beautiful Harry/Hermione Harmony. How is that not great?
10/4/2013 c11 doubledamn
He should DEFINITELY pull Godric's sword out of the Sorting Hat during Sorting. Then get sorted into Ravenclaw to mess with everyone.

P.S
Why does no one give the Sword back to the Goblins? They made itThey own it. Kill the snake and return it.
10/4/2013 c10 doubledamn
Cool. With the "Neville the Malfoy" what house will he be in? I can rule out Gryffindor and Hufflepuff easily - house of the brave, house of the humble.
10/4/2013 c9 doubledamn
Sirius would be so proud. James would be too. Lily would be worried. And Lupin would be amused.

Harry does seem to be more...Sirius in this one.
10/4/2013 c7 doubledamn
Lightning Phoenix alright, that's pretty cool or...shocking! Badum tish! (Sorry had to do it)

Since his animagus is a phoenix would that mean that he is now immortal? If animal characteristics carry over to the user while in human form then he might be.

P.S
Technically that would be a Thunder Bird. Although I'm not sure on the Thunder Bird Mythology, so it could just be a different elemental phoenix. Could he talk to birds once he got his form?
10/4/2013 c6 doubledamn
Different Elemental Phoenix? That sounds cool.
Fire
Ice
Most obvious two
Electricity - maybe, technically a Thunder Bird (Native American mythology)
Darkness/Light - Maybe, probably not an option though
Oooh. A Plasma Phoenix, that could be interesting.
Maybe Toxin? But I don't know how that would work.
10/4/2013 c5 doubledamn
Fantastic. Of course this may cause Sirius to accuse him of psychological torture. Finally letting his mother close just before he leaves for 9 months? Suspicious of the 'old' Harry, Sirius will definitely think something is up.

I'm betting that they will only start to believe him when he gets sorted into something other than Slytherin. I wonder how the talk with the Sorting Hat will go this time? That piece of fabric was always too inquisitive for its own good.

P.S
Really? You're only just starting to learn English? I couldn't tell in the slightest. Really - NOT SARCASM, SINCERE.
10/4/2013 c4 doubledamn
If you're still choosing animagus I vote for Chimera. That would be cool and technically 3-4 different animals.

If there is some leftover influence on the magic of the originals body 'new' Harry's soul, I think dual core for the wand, Phoenix Feather Dragon Heartstring in an Elm wand.
10/4/2013 c3 doubledamn
So Karma suggested male Veela huh? He's a bit of a pervert isn't he? Couple that with spending all his time watching different versions of an 10 year old boy go through puberty over the course of around 7 years...
10/4/2013 c2 doubledamn
Nice. I'm really glad you got rid of that Harry. Now I enjoy a good DarkHero. But the point is they are still a HERO. Meaning they never take it too far. Thanks for stopping that, even if he just ends up in someone else's fanfic.

Considering this is a harem story, would the enhanced sense/reflexes include longer...'staying power'?
10/4/2013 c1 doubledamn
Harry. That was just so...Slytherin of you. Well done.

That was really unexpected.

To: The Author -

Well written, great chapter. Could have been a one shot but looking forward to what you have next.
9/29/2013 c25 2Arafell
That - is an evil cliffie. Not that you'd actually kill him off, but I'd really like to know whats coming up next :P

Also, the whole underground japanese thing sounds interesting. I wonder if the wards block phoenix apparition.
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