for Sacrificial Second Chance2/10/2020 c11 Guest
the grammar and spelling kinda sucks, it's not h/hr, and it's boring.
the grammar and spelling kinda sucks, it's not h/hr, and it's boring.
2/2/2020 c13 
3lsgp
sigh, you went from a good premise to stupidly Mary Sue to such an OOC (Harry almost killing Draco full of bloodlust). its got boring.
3lsgpsigh, you went from a good premise to stupidly Mary Sue to such an OOC (Harry almost killing Draco full of bloodlust). its got boring.
1/30/2020 c25 OmniViceUser
A good Story, and i would really like to see it proceed, but that is foolish after nearly 7 Years
A good Story, and i would really like to see it proceed, but that is foolish after nearly 7 Years
12/4/2019 c21 Guest
This harry is unstable and wrong. What is worth for reicarnating if he didnt use his knowledge. I would rather he died in his old world after experience war voldemort and meet his old family than this drama shit. Fucking author is masochist making harry suffer TWICE. Better he curbstomp everything author, he is fighting bloodthirsty deatheater, dementor, basilisk and voldy but lose against little girl named Vega. Fuck this shit story, i would use imperio and pull information from that bitch.
This harry is unstable and wrong. What is worth for reicarnating if he didnt use his knowledge. I would rather he died in his old world after experience war voldemort and meet his old family than this drama shit. Fucking author is masochist making harry suffer TWICE. Better he curbstomp everything author, he is fighting bloodthirsty deatheater, dementor, basilisk and voldy but lose against little girl named Vega. Fuck this shit story, i would use imperio and pull information from that bitch.
11/14/2019 c9 1phoenixstave
Why would Spain use a different language for there spells? Spanish, French and Itallian are all based on Latin so the spells used in Britain would still be aplicable, more Nothern and Eastern European countries might used different spells as they weren't counquered by the Romans. Though really over the millenia given portkeys and apparition you would possibly the Latinesque spells spreading if they were easier to cast, meaning for truely diifernt spells you would have to look towards Central and Southern Africa, Asia and the Far East, and possibly Mexico and South America if the Spanish didn't destroy every thing when they killed the majority of the populations.
1phoenixstaveWhy would Spain use a different language for there spells? Spanish, French and Itallian are all based on Latin so the spells used in Britain would still be aplicable, more Nothern and Eastern European countries might used different spells as they weren't counquered by the Romans. Though really over the millenia given portkeys and apparition you would possibly the Latinesque spells spreading if they were easier to cast, meaning for truely diifernt spells you would have to look towards Central and Southern Africa, Asia and the Far East, and possibly Mexico and South America if the Spanish didn't destroy every thing when they killed the majority of the populations.
11/3/2019 c25 Guest
Update man
Update man
11/1/2019 c25 Skely
Hey hope you're still writing, I'm all for author freedom but I honestly liked the original girls he was involved with. Your character development was progressing at a steady pace but this chapter had harry acting more aggressively and I feel he betrayed Iris after he confessed his feelings to her. TBH i would rather a small but manageable group of girls and meaningful character development rather than straight up girls and sex.
Hey hope you're still writing, I'm all for author freedom but I honestly liked the original girls he was involved with. Your character development was progressing at a steady pace but this chapter had harry acting more aggressively and I feel he betrayed Iris after he confessed his feelings to her. TBH i would rather a small but manageable group of girls and meaningful character development rather than straight up girls and sex.
8/13/2019 c20 Guest
My man Harry taking some FAT L'S this chapter.
My man Harry taking some FAT L'S this chapter.
7/2/2019 c5 HEEEEEEEYYYYY
I would say that the previous owner of the bodies Animagus should be a Very Poisonous Hostile Snake and now that this Harry has taken the body it should be a Dragon.
I would say that the previous owner of the bodies Animagus should be a Very Poisonous Hostile Snake and now that this Harry has taken the body it should be a Dragon.
6/29/2019 c25 arata7kasuga
I mean, Harry could honestly just use the two way mirror to stay in contact with Iris...
I mean, Harry could honestly just use the two way mirror to stay in contact with Iris...