for Bar Room Angel OS6/9/2012 c1 Daisy Row
I always find it a bit hard to relate to familiar characters in a new light, so I always have that to overcome when starting a fan fic. I must be adjusting somewhat, it was certainly easier this time round. Not a bad read so far, and I'm certainly keen for the next chapter. Well done.
I always find it a bit hard to relate to familiar characters in a new light, so I always have that to overcome when starting a fan fic. I must be adjusting somewhat, it was certainly easier this time round. Not a bad read so far, and I'm certainly keen for the next chapter. Well done.
2/8/2012 c2 AlwaysAngel
Yea! I am so happy to hear that. I am subscibing to the Author alert! I look forward to reading your more of your stories, including the continuation of Bar Room Angel!
Yea! I am so happy to hear that. I am subscibing to the Author alert! I look forward to reading your more of your stories, including the continuation of Bar Room Angel!
2/8/2012 c2 Jigga0408
I don't know if u've found a beta but I'd love to help! I have to be honest that I've never beta'd for someone before but I've been reading fan fiction for a couple years and I read pretty much everyday so I've read awesome stories that could have the plot published and some that need another lesson on the English language. If ur willing to take a chance on me e-mail me if u've found someone more experienced thats completely fine I'm still reading the story! ;-)
I don't know if u've found a beta but I'd love to help! I have to be honest that I've never beta'd for someone before but I've been reading fan fiction for a couple years and I read pretty much everyday so I've read awesome stories that could have the plot published and some that need another lesson on the English language. If ur willing to take a chance on me e-mail me if u've found someone more experienced thats completely fine I'm still reading the story! ;-)
2/8/2012 c2 Leibeezer
I just found this oneshot, and I thought you did an amazing job. I'm glad that you decided to continue with this story. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
I just found this oneshot, and I thought you did an amazing job. I'm glad that you decided to continue with this story. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.
2/8/2012 c1 
2JoeMomma1214
Please, please, please don't stop with one chapter! I'm begging you to continue this story! It was a great chapter, and there were only a few things I caught that needed editing. If you would like a beta, I am more than willing to help! Please continue! :)
2JoeMomma1214Please, please, please don't stop with one chapter! I'm begging you to continue this story! It was a great chapter, and there were only a few things I caught that needed editing. If you would like a beta, I am more than willing to help! Please continue! :)
2/7/2012 c1 2twillover1313
yes please. i would love for you to continue writing this story. this is truly amonst the best "first" stories i've readand look forward not only to more of this story, but of others that you write.
2twillover1313yes please. i would love for you to continue writing this story. this is truly amonst the best "first" stories i've readand look forward not only to more of this story, but of others that you write.
2/7/2012 c1 1Veronica Carlie Cullen
I think this one has the potential of turning into a good story. You should most definitely continue it. Even though I love what you've written so far, it seems incomplete. So it definitely be a multiple chapter fic. And hoping that you would continue I am putting this story on alert. I hope that encourages you to continue. Looking forward to it.
Hugs and kisses
Veronica
1Veronica Carlie CullenI think this one has the potential of turning into a good story. You should most definitely continue it. Even though I love what you've written so far, it seems incomplete. So it definitely be a multiple chapter fic. And hoping that you would continue I am putting this story on alert. I hope that encourages you to continue. Looking forward to it.
Hugs and kisses
Veronica
2/6/2012 c1 AlwaysAngel
What you have here is a one shot story that needs to be turned into the first chapter of the epic love story that it has the potential to be. There is just so much that wants to be shared with your readers that is still bottled up tight within the story that you wrote. I hope you will consider this. I felt this story was very easy to read and I was able to connect to the charachters as they told their own sides in the story. Great job writing! :)
What you have here is a one shot story that needs to be turned into the first chapter of the epic love story that it has the potential to be. There is just so much that wants to be shared with your readers that is still bottled up tight within the story that you wrote. I hope you will consider this. I felt this story was very easy to read and I was able to connect to the charachters as they told their own sides in the story. Great job writing! :)
2/6/2012 c1 fourbrats
I would love it if you continued this story. This was amazing and I think that reading about the two of them would be awesome. PLEASE!
I would love it if you continued this story. This was amazing and I think that reading about the two of them would be awesome. PLEASE!
2/6/2012 c1 RPattz716
Loved it...should def continue this...i sure love me some tattward...and we need to knw what his last tatt was... :)
Loved it...should def continue this...i sure love me some tattward...and we need to knw what his last tatt was... :)