
4/11/2021 c17 Guest
Yeah Thats what happen if they did somenthing to Undeveloped Country its like giving a gun to medieval men and then thinking it was power of god. Bruh this series is awesome i hope it continue.
Yeah Thats what happen if they did somenthing to Undeveloped Country its like giving a gun to medieval men and then thinking it was power of god. Bruh this series is awesome i hope it continue.
3/22/2021 c34 x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x
After reading this, I could see Artanis and Jim facepalming themselves, thinking along the lines of 'what have we done?' or something like that lmao.
After reading this, I could see Artanis and Jim facepalming themselves, thinking along the lines of 'what have we done?' or something like that lmao.
10/1/2020 c21 Guest
This balancing sucks lol and that SOS signal didnt even went through to any protoss at koprulu sector? The heck is happening?
This balancing sucks lol and that SOS signal didnt even went through to any protoss at koprulu sector? The heck is happening?
9/15/2020 c5 Guest
My only criticism to this is, you stick too literally to the Warcraft unit lists and their abilities, and do not add the logical and evident supplementary equipment and units they would have.
I mean, sure, all night elf archers, those panther riders and so on are female and they cloak at night. In the game, archers have ZERO MELEE ATTACK.
But, in our history, archers DID have back-up melee weapons (daggers, axes and such), and logically, the night elves SHOULD have come up with this idea as well. Therefore, when the enemy closes in, they SHOULD NOT be clubbing them with their bows (an idiotic idea) but drawing their back-up melee weapon instead.
Why do the night elves EXCLUSIVELY use archers as their ONLY INFANTRY? Enough enemies can and will survive archer fire, reach their lines in enough numbers and engage them in hand-to-hand. Do they just hope they don't, and resort to CLUBBING THEM WITH THEIR BOWS when it happens? Just because they're not in Warcraft 3, does not mean they don't exist, and have never existed.
In World of WarCraft, night elf cities also have guards with ACTUAL MELEE WEAPONS defending them. Guys with swords, shields, spears, medium to heavy armor. You know, infantry with the staying power, equipment and training to create a battle line, guard town walls, and act as the anvil to the cavalry's hammer. They would historically have them, even though they are NOT in WarCraft 3 for reasons of game balance.
Humans are NOT going to be entirely lacking in range weapons. I mean, until their alliance with the Dwarves, did humans not use ranged weapons AT ALL, aside from Dwarven muskets? Were they all just a horde of morons with swords, armor, shields, heavy cavalry and some magic guys? Did they not have bows, crossbows, and specialist troops of archers and crossbowmen, until the Dwarves came along with their mortar team, and helped them build steam tanks? Could they not have had catapults and ballista? Did they not have spears for use against cavalry, and for poking big monsters from afar? Did they not have light cavalry for reconnaissance and patrolling?
Okay, in WarCraft 3, NOBODY CAN BUILD ACTUAL WALLS IN THE GAME. But walls DO EXIST in WarCraft in general. Why should they find the concept of wall completely alien? Why SHOULDN'T they build at least a palisade of logs around their encampments? Why couldn't they have gates as well? Trenches for impeding the charge of cavalry or giant monsters, lined with sharpened stakes? It's entirely within their pseudo-medieval capabilities to dig a trench and line it with sharp sticks.
If they can build complex structures using stone and timber during the length of a game, then they SHOULD be able to build a wall of logs, a hinged gate, and dig anti-monster trenches. They're NOT in the game, but they MAKE SENSE.
I know that you're presenting the game's units, but come on, fill in the gaps. Because, I assure you, if it sounds retarded to you that night elf archers in melee would try and CLUB THEIR ENEMIES WITH THEIR BOWS, instead of drawing, like, a dagger or small axe for defense, it does sound retarded to us, the readers, as well.
They CAN build walls and gates. Their archers CAN have daggers for backup.
Humans COULD be archers, crossbowmen, spearmen, light cavalry. They COULD have catapults and ballistas.
Likewise, dwarves COULD be trained in more roles other than gunner or mortar operators, they COULD use armor, shields, swords, axes, hammers, maces and spears. There COULD be dwarven line infantry.
There COULD be night elven and high elven line infantry, with armor, shields, swords, axes, hammers, maces and spears. The high elves COULD have cavalry.
And from World of WarCraft, which is canon, we KNOW that there could be more sorts of magic users, with more varied powers, and that elves are NOT allergic to armor and melee weapons, that dwarves DO have melee infantry of their very own, that humans CAN use bows, crossbows, spears, etc.
These possibilities DO EXIST. So why limit yourself exclusively to the game logic of WarCraft? Why not use it as a starting point, and add, within reason, everything else that they could be missing?
The night elves are THOUSANDS OF YEARS OLD, man. Do you think they're IDIOTS?
Would their archers not carry back-up melee weapons as last-resort defense?
Could bows EVER be useful as a club? Or would you rather carry a dagger or small axe for personal defense, or when arrows run out?
Be reasonable.
My only criticism to this is, you stick too literally to the Warcraft unit lists and their abilities, and do not add the logical and evident supplementary equipment and units they would have.
I mean, sure, all night elf archers, those panther riders and so on are female and they cloak at night. In the game, archers have ZERO MELEE ATTACK.
But, in our history, archers DID have back-up melee weapons (daggers, axes and such), and logically, the night elves SHOULD have come up with this idea as well. Therefore, when the enemy closes in, they SHOULD NOT be clubbing them with their bows (an idiotic idea) but drawing their back-up melee weapon instead.
Why do the night elves EXCLUSIVELY use archers as their ONLY INFANTRY? Enough enemies can and will survive archer fire, reach their lines in enough numbers and engage them in hand-to-hand. Do they just hope they don't, and resort to CLUBBING THEM WITH THEIR BOWS when it happens? Just because they're not in Warcraft 3, does not mean they don't exist, and have never existed.
In World of WarCraft, night elf cities also have guards with ACTUAL MELEE WEAPONS defending them. Guys with swords, shields, spears, medium to heavy armor. You know, infantry with the staying power, equipment and training to create a battle line, guard town walls, and act as the anvil to the cavalry's hammer. They would historically have them, even though they are NOT in WarCraft 3 for reasons of game balance.
Humans are NOT going to be entirely lacking in range weapons. I mean, until their alliance with the Dwarves, did humans not use ranged weapons AT ALL, aside from Dwarven muskets? Were they all just a horde of morons with swords, armor, shields, heavy cavalry and some magic guys? Did they not have bows, crossbows, and specialist troops of archers and crossbowmen, until the Dwarves came along with their mortar team, and helped them build steam tanks? Could they not have had catapults and ballista? Did they not have spears for use against cavalry, and for poking big monsters from afar? Did they not have light cavalry for reconnaissance and patrolling?
Okay, in WarCraft 3, NOBODY CAN BUILD ACTUAL WALLS IN THE GAME. But walls DO EXIST in WarCraft in general. Why should they find the concept of wall completely alien? Why SHOULDN'T they build at least a palisade of logs around their encampments? Why couldn't they have gates as well? Trenches for impeding the charge of cavalry or giant monsters, lined with sharpened stakes? It's entirely within their pseudo-medieval capabilities to dig a trench and line it with sharp sticks.
If they can build complex structures using stone and timber during the length of a game, then they SHOULD be able to build a wall of logs, a hinged gate, and dig anti-monster trenches. They're NOT in the game, but they MAKE SENSE.
I know that you're presenting the game's units, but come on, fill in the gaps. Because, I assure you, if it sounds retarded to you that night elf archers in melee would try and CLUB THEIR ENEMIES WITH THEIR BOWS, instead of drawing, like, a dagger or small axe for defense, it does sound retarded to us, the readers, as well.
They CAN build walls and gates. Their archers CAN have daggers for backup.
Humans COULD be archers, crossbowmen, spearmen, light cavalry. They COULD have catapults and ballistas.
Likewise, dwarves COULD be trained in more roles other than gunner or mortar operators, they COULD use armor, shields, swords, axes, hammers, maces and spears. There COULD be dwarven line infantry.
There COULD be night elven and high elven line infantry, with armor, shields, swords, axes, hammers, maces and spears. The high elves COULD have cavalry.
And from World of WarCraft, which is canon, we KNOW that there could be more sorts of magic users, with more varied powers, and that elves are NOT allergic to armor and melee weapons, that dwarves DO have melee infantry of their very own, that humans CAN use bows, crossbows, spears, etc.
These possibilities DO EXIST. So why limit yourself exclusively to the game logic of WarCraft? Why not use it as a starting point, and add, within reason, everything else that they could be missing?
The night elves are THOUSANDS OF YEARS OLD, man. Do you think they're IDIOTS?
Would their archers not carry back-up melee weapons as last-resort defense?
Could bows EVER be useful as a club? Or would you rather carry a dagger or small axe for personal defense, or when arrows run out?
Be reasonable.
7/14/2020 c38
1Delta4Phoenix
I love this story. It is well written and balanced. I hope you can continue soon, though I know how hard writer’s block can be to deal with. From one Starcraft fan to another: Gl Hf. ;)

I love this story. It is well written and balanced. I hope you can continue soon, though I know how hard writer’s block can be to deal with. From one Starcraft fan to another: Gl Hf. ;)
12/3/2019 c38 Guest
I absolutely love this story if u getting writers block take u time in getting through it. But pleaz don't abandon this great idea. I've read too many wonderful fanfiction that I'll never know the end too because they were abandoned. Hope u doing well. :)
I absolutely love this story if u getting writers block take u time in getting through it. But pleaz don't abandon this great idea. I've read too many wonderful fanfiction that I'll never know the end too because they were abandoned. Hope u doing well. :)
10/20/2019 c38 sugoijack9
Star Trek as well has a protocol to not engaged any activity of an undeveloped inhabited world. Technically some sci-fi stories of highly advanced beings and space-faring humans would never much move towards such primitives. If such a case, it would be ancient astronauts to the natives such events.
Star Trek as well has a protocol to not engaged any activity of an undeveloped inhabited world. Technically some sci-fi stories of highly advanced beings and space-faring humans would never much move towards such primitives. If such a case, it would be ancient astronauts to the natives such events.
10/20/2019 c33 sugoijack9
Kill that filthy demi-human hater already.
This is warcraft. A world that would flourish with all beings alike.
Removed already that despicable human.
Kill that filthy demi-human hater already.
This is warcraft. A world that would flourish with all beings alike.
Removed already that despicable human.
10/20/2019 c28 sugoijack9
The Zerg would make the Burning Legions look like puppies.
Terran nukes end it all.
The Zerg would make the Burning Legions look like puppies.
Terran nukes end it all.
10/20/2019 c26 sugoijack9
More like the Burning Legion want the Protoss and Terrans show all their cards.
Completely they underestimated them.
I mean the whole power of theirs is offworlds and if they invaded Azeroth. It would be the end. For both sides if Terrans used Nukes and Protoss used their Spear of Adun.
More like the Burning Legion want the Protoss and Terrans show all their cards.
Completely they underestimated them.
I mean the whole power of theirs is offworlds and if they invaded Azeroth. It would be the end. For both sides if Terrans used Nukes and Protoss used their Spear of Adun.
10/20/2019 c38 Guest
This has been quite the adventure I would like to see more also if you ever continue this story you could have more than one primal zerg join kerrigan as additional points of interaction for the biologically based race, some of them could even devour an evil spell caster and gain the ability to use magic
If you don't have the motivation then that is your problem if you want to finish this story
This has been quite the adventure I would like to see more also if you ever continue this story you could have more than one primal zerg join kerrigan as additional points of interaction for the biologically based race, some of them could even devour an evil spell caster and gain the ability to use magic
If you don't have the motivation then that is your problem if you want to finish this story
10/18/2019 c28 Prince DarkStar
""That must be the sign" said Artanis. Moving observers over to the town, dimensional rifts were closing stopping the Burning Legions advances there. However that left them wide open as portals were now opening up everywhere around them. But it wasn't going to matter very soon. Activating the ships plasma shields, they expanded out encompassing all their allies within the protective field.
Now arriving on scene, the nukes flew into the rifts as they entered the Twisted Nethers. Seeing these four metal cylinders, none knew the horrors they were soon to experience. Upon hitting the ground, the full force of nuclear energy was released as the lives of millions of demons were over in an instant. With the blast of intense heat, light, and radiation everything within a hundred miles of the detonation point was annihilated. With the rifts still open, that same force rained out radioactive fire all around the Shield of Auir."
ME: EEEEAAATTT MMMMMMYYYYY DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK!
""That must be the sign" said Artanis. Moving observers over to the town, dimensional rifts were closing stopping the Burning Legions advances there. However that left them wide open as portals were now opening up everywhere around them. But it wasn't going to matter very soon. Activating the ships plasma shields, they expanded out encompassing all their allies within the protective field.
Now arriving on scene, the nukes flew into the rifts as they entered the Twisted Nethers. Seeing these four metal cylinders, none knew the horrors they were soon to experience. Upon hitting the ground, the full force of nuclear energy was released as the lives of millions of demons were over in an instant. With the blast of intense heat, light, and radiation everything within a hundred miles of the detonation point was annihilated. With the rifts still open, that same force rained out radioactive fire all around the Shield of Auir."
ME: EEEEAAATTT MMMMMMYYYYY DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK!