for Unknown Human Emotions9/28/2016 c8 
6avanaka
Awesome. I love this story. It's an excellent. I'd love to read more of this. Update soon, please.
6avanakaAwesome. I love this story. It's an excellent. I'd love to read more of this. Update soon, please.
9/5/2016 c9 Taramina
I just found your story the other night and I have already read every thing you have and I know you may not have many reviews but your story is so good I hope you do go back to it some day I understand life can get the best of us all at time I just hope you haven't forgotten about your story
I just found your story the other night and I have already read every thing you have and I know you may not have many reviews but your story is so good I hope you do go back to it some day I understand life can get the best of us all at time I just hope you haven't forgotten about your story
2/5/2014 c9 1animafreak14
So I am hoping that you continue with this story I would like to see how you explain William changing back and forth and loving a human. Please keep writing
1animafreak14So I am hoping that you continue with this story I would like to see how you explain William changing back and forth and loving a human. Please keep writing
12/13/2013 c9 ceres18
holaaaaaaaa ! he leido tu historia y me encanto, siento las emociones de los personajes... Marcus me encanta, estoy enamorado de el, jajajjajaj.
Se que actualizaste ya hace mucho tiempo pero espero que retomes esta historia en algún momento, lo espero con muchas ancias.
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Ceres18
holaaaaaaaa ! he leido tu historia y me encanto, siento las emociones de los personajes... Marcus me encanta, estoy enamorado de el, jajajjajaj.
Se que actualizaste ya hace mucho tiempo pero espero que retomes esta historia en algún momento, lo espero con muchas ancias.
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Ceres18
12/13/2013 c9 the.blue.eyes.ghost
it's such a beautiful story, i was reading it with the music of the hobbit 2 ( i see fire) it's gave me goosebumps. i hope to read the next chapter
it's such a beautiful story, i was reading it with the music of the hobbit 2 ( i see fire) it's gave me goosebumps. i hope to read the next chapter
12/9/2013 c9 smyers
Please continue this story.
Please continue this story.
10/20/2013 c9 Guest
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
9/5/2013 c1 The Fox Familiar
First problem? Too many POVs. Pick one and stick with it. Personally, I'd prefer it if you just stuck with Elizabeth's. Secondly, author's notes are not allowed as chapters, so you must remove it. I'd like this story, but the countless POVs must be removed.
First problem? Too many POVs. Pick one and stick with it. Personally, I'd prefer it if you just stuck with Elizabeth's. Secondly, author's notes are not allowed as chapters, so you must remove it. I'd like this story, but the countless POVs must be removed.