for Good High School for the Performing Arts5/4 c6 Firstglance
Sorry man. I am gonna drop it. I th8nk my mood just got to me. I clubbed an exam today, and can't really hang around till this gets better. Can't say I didn't try. I know it will get better, I just am unable to wait till it does.
If it is any consolation, when it comes to entertainment, I am not patient. Heck I am so impatient that I cannot finish animes. I go straight in and finish their Mangas.
So, yeah. This just didn't cater to my wants, but it likely catered to someone else's. Can't please everyone after all.
One favour tho. When you are free, could you rewrite the first chapters once more? Give it a cleaner, more detailed setting? It would make all the difference for any future like me person.️
Sorry man. I am gonna drop it. I th8nk my mood just got to me. I clubbed an exam today, and can't really hang around till this gets better. Can't say I didn't try. I know it will get better, I just am unable to wait till it does.
If it is any consolation, when it comes to entertainment, I am not patient. Heck I am so impatient that I cannot finish animes. I go straight in and finish their Mangas.
So, yeah. This just didn't cater to my wants, but it likely catered to someone else's. Can't please everyone after all.
One favour tho. When you are free, could you rewrite the first chapters once more? Give it a cleaner, more detailed setting? It would make all the difference for any future like me person.️
5/4 c5 Firstglance
Foreshadowing: the writing gets better. I have no doubt it does. It has gotta. There is no way it doesn't.
Foreshadowing: the writing gets better. I have no doubt it does. It has gotta. There is no way it doesn't.
5/4 c4 Firstglance
Sir, anna, brother. What is with those typos? It's basically unbearable. I am gonna critique this till it gets good man. Honestly, I don't think it even matters. You already finished writing the next 100 chapters. Just venting, I guess. But productively.
Sir, anna, brother. What is with those typos? It's basically unbearable. I am gonna critique this till it gets good man. Honestly, I don't think it even matters. You already finished writing the next 100 chapters. Just venting, I guess. But productively.
5/4 c3 Firstglance
No way it stays like this The whole way. I don't think it is even possible. This is wayy too mid to have made it that far. Sorry if I am being blunt, I came across some really crazy good fanfics and can't help but compare. Sorry bro.
No way it stays like this The whole way. I don't think it is even possible. This is wayy too mid to have made it that far. Sorry if I am being blunt, I came across some really crazy good fanfics and can't help but compare. Sorry bro.
5/4 c2 Firstglance
The writing is gonna improve, yes? The plot and all is fine,but the pacing is absolutely butchered. You are skipping past scenes where details are actually necessary, leaving behind a vague sense of something missing.
The writing is gonna improve, yes? The plot and all is fine,but the pacing is absolutely butchered. You are skipping past scenes where details are actually necessary, leaving behind a vague sense of something missing.
5/4 c1 Firstglance
Too fast man. Wayyy too fast. Yall fiction writers always seem to rush the first chapter to get to the juicy bits quickly. I don't even doubt that the story gets better, I know it does. I have seen the word count around 400 k. Casual writers can't usually make it that far. Just the first chapter. You gotta slow it down.
Too fast man. Wayyy too fast. Yall fiction writers always seem to rush the first chapter to get to the juicy bits quickly. I don't even doubt that the story gets better, I know it does. I have seen the word count around 400 k. Casual writers can't usually make it that far. Just the first chapter. You gotta slow it down.
6/5/2024 c1 
2D11 Cosmic Studios
I like it, I loved pjo but it clashes with faith so this is a nice loophole
2D11 Cosmic StudiosI like it, I loved pjo but it clashes with faith so this is a nice loophole
7/28/2023 c101 Wayfarer1989
Um, can we do something like Percy and Annabeth are injured severely, and Hazel is really sad, yada, yada, yada?
Um, can we do something like Percy and Annabeth are injured severely, and Hazel is really sad, yada, yada, yada?
5/27/2023 c2 Guest
Am I— Am I reading a high school AU of camp rock right now?
Am I— Am I reading a high school AU of camp rock right now?
1/16/2023 c67 9kenyatta.harmon0516
I think your Grammar is a bit off. Some names aren't capitalized when they should be. No other issue though.
LOVE THIS STORY.
9kenyatta.harmon0516I think your Grammar is a bit off. Some names aren't capitalized when they should be. No other issue though.
LOVE THIS STORY.
12/16/2022 c1 GleeLover243
Will you PLEASE ADD YOUR FIC to Achieve of our Own.
is great but sometime the site is down for like hours and some browser dont use this website on my phone/computer.
Also I know many use this website over FanFiction so you'll get many views there..
Will you PLEASE ADD YOUR FIC to Achieve of our Own.
is great but sometime the site is down for like hours and some browser dont use this website on my phone/computer.
Also I know many use this website over FanFiction so you'll get many views there..