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4/22 c5 Nekotamo
Great story. Hope you keep updating it in due time, I can see you have a lot on your plate :D I think you portrayed the grimmness of a Voldie victory very well. That was some quality nightmare fuel if that makes sense. Your writing style is good and clear. Character interactions on point. All in all good stuff.

If you care to hear some constructive criticism then one of the things I'd note is you kind of went "cool Draco goes in, asshole Ronald goes out" and quite hard at that. Well at least he is not a Deatheater, yet :P Still that felt a bit cliche and forced, maybe it would have been better if he remained part of the dynamic. He would slow down Draco's efforts but it would feel more natural for it. And eventually even he has to mellow out I figure ;)

I'd also make more use of Draco if I were you. As in he was the leader of their army in the future, an adult wizard who was presumably tutored in some powerful magic. He acts pretty much how a Draco of his years would, he should be much more mature, composed and capable. I get he might be a bit emotionally stunted given his circumstances but still.
Likewise why not use his knowledge more, now that the other two trusted him they could have tried Dumbledore. It is not hard to check if Moody was polyjuiced. Then set a trap for Voldie in the cemetery. Instead of Harry portkeying in it is Dumbledore. Take out the Rat and seize baby!Voldie. You can keep him imprisoned indefinitely and the war is won :D I get that kind of would have ended the plot and all, but his knowledge should be better utilized for sure.

Anyway as I said loved the story, hope I see more of you soon if you know what I mean ;)
1/22 c4 4Azure Shine
wow i cant believe this is update. Thanks for not forget this. Take your time, reality always number one, i will patiently wait for more
6/28/2022 c5 Trousseaux
What a lovely story, hope to see another chapter at some point but please take all the time you need! I love all your stories
2/27/2022 c5 1delmar.alani
Very nicely done
7/23/2021 c5 PotatoeFaceDragon
2/9/2021 c4 nkh1
Due to the silly rules on reviews only one per chapter. I have to pot this on an early chapter. Draco and Harry both have their memories now. How soon the rest?
1/7/2021 c2 Guest
12/30/2020 c5 1Kateri87
Any chance of a continuation?
9/1/2020 c5 Old Girl Lost
PhD - Husband- travel abroad. - a cat -
Maybe by now a job - a kid (or kids)-
A life.
Not going to finish this (probably).
Still a good story. Sorry not to get the rest of it.
Life is more important.
Keep on living.
Good luck
8/25/2020 c5 37Snaperipper
I would love to see this story continued. I thought that you had a great premise, with all of them going back after realizing how horrible their lives had become with Voldemort incharge. Stay Safe and Healthy!
7/9/2020 c4 7sagiie
i really hope that you can continue this wonderful and amazing story, please is really good and original, i never reed something similar about this trama where Draco traveled in time and made the rigth thin, and the caracters took the place from their young versions, greetings
7/4/2020 c5 bluetrash
I dearly wish you'd continue this. Maybe as a sequel.
5/2/2020 c5 rachaelr4
I love this story! Time travel fics are my favorite and this is the first one I’ve read where Draco came back! Please keep updating!
4/24/2020 c5 eccentricess
Oh I really enjoyed this and the concept is so cool.
Kittens rule.
4/10/2020 c5 rowenasheir
Please finish this story. Need a good read during the lnext three weeks while South Africa is in lockdown, please!
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