
6/4/2012 c27
9lovesong101
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. i feel so bad for mark. and the last part was so emotional. i loved it! please update soon. great job

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. i feel so bad for mark. and the last part was so emotional. i loved it! please update soon. great job
6/4/2012 c27
2TMariee
If you want to know more about the Callan Twins and the allusion to the stabbing look up callan twins: toni's story

If you want to know more about the Callan Twins and the allusion to the stabbing look up callan twins: toni's story
6/4/2012 c27 1h2a34
I want a cupcake! Anyways, I loved this. I'm glad that you did the tie skip. I'm also excited to hear that they will be changed. Anna and Mark deserve better. Update soon!
I want a cupcake! Anyways, I loved this. I'm glad that you did the tie skip. I'm also excited to hear that they will be changed. Anna and Mark deserve better. Update soon!
5/30/2012 c26 Guest
I love this story, continuing writing please. This is something I would read again!
I love this story, continuing writing please. This is something I would read again!
5/29/2012 c26 ActingLovingAardvark
So, hi there. I just found your story today and all... and read the entire thing in a couple of hours. Yup. It's true. Personally, I love stories with original characters (my Alex saga that I write on FanFic is a prime example of that), and I like Anna and Mark. They're so tough. If I EVER had to go through the same things as them (and I'm lucky that I do not), I don't know what kind of state I'd been in. I really hope you update soon... And, yeah. That's it. ;) AWESOME STORY! :D
So, hi there. I just found your story today and all... and read the entire thing in a couple of hours. Yup. It's true. Personally, I love stories with original characters (my Alex saga that I write on FanFic is a prime example of that), and I like Anna and Mark. They're so tough. If I EVER had to go through the same things as them (and I'm lucky that I do not), I don't know what kind of state I'd been in. I really hope you update soon... And, yeah. That's it. ;) AWESOME STORY! :D
5/29/2012 c26 gabe
so kat you should have mark fall in love with toni and toni not like him at all
so kat you should have mark fall in love with toni and toni not like him at all
5/29/2012 c26 Toni should heart mark
uhhhh yeah you should time skip
uhhhh yeah you should time skip
5/21/2012 c25 lovesong101
I lve it. It was a good chap. Tomorrow is a half day of school and also the last day. So as soon as I get home I will help u in whatever u need.
I lve it. It was a good chap. Tomorrow is a half day of school and also the last day. So as soon as I get home I will help u in whatever u need.
5/21/2012 c25 1h2a34
It was a little short, but still good. It gave us the information we needed and wanted to know.
I completely know what you are going through. I know where I want to take one of my stories, but it just isn't working out on paper.
Anyways the chapter was still good, and as always Update soon.
It was a little short, but still good. It gave us the information we needed and wanted to know.
I completely know what you are going through. I know where I want to take one of my stories, but it just isn't working out on paper.
Anyways the chapter was still good, and as always Update soon.
5/21/2012 c25
50Cinderfire16akaThundertheWolf
Pretty cool! I think you should make something happen in the future that only Mark and Anna can stop. (It might end up in their Dad going to jail?); but I can't wait to seewhat happens next.
P.S., if you take my advice, I wojld make it the plot and not just one chapter...
you gave the twins some nice instincts!
Hope you update soon; I can't wait to see how this goes!

Pretty cool! I think you should make something happen in the future that only Mark and Anna can stop. (It might end up in their Dad going to jail?); but I can't wait to seewhat happens next.
P.S., if you take my advice, I wojld make it the plot and not just one chapter...
you gave the twins some nice instincts!
Hope you update soon; I can't wait to see how this goes!
5/21/2012 c25 Cinderfire16akaThundertheWolf
Pretty cool! I think you should make something happen in the future that only Mark and Anna can stop. (It might end up in their Dad going to jail?); but I can't wait to seewhat happens next.
P.S., if you take my advice, I wojld make it the plot and not just one chapter...
you gave the twins some nice instincts!
Hope you update soon; I can't wait to see how this goes!
Pretty cool! I think you should make something happen in the future that only Mark and Anna can stop. (It might end up in their Dad going to jail?); but I can't wait to seewhat happens next.
P.S., if you take my advice, I wojld make it the plot and not just one chapter...
you gave the twins some nice instincts!
Hope you update soon; I can't wait to see how this goes!