for Once Upon a Time2/13/2012 c1 Silent Sentimentality
The slow style of your writing gives the underlying atmosphere a profoundness I was surprised by. You refrained from excessive dialogue. The little dialogue you included in your story imparted a touching ending that left me reflecting on the purity and complexity of love. You are a sincerely talented author. I hope to read more work you post. XD
Respectfully,
Silent Sentimentality
The slow style of your writing gives the underlying atmosphere a profoundness I was surprised by. You refrained from excessive dialogue. The little dialogue you included in your story imparted a touching ending that left me reflecting on the purity and complexity of love. You are a sincerely talented author. I hope to read more work you post. XD
Respectfully,
Silent Sentimentality
2/13/2012 c1 
19cigarettesandlatte
A g...gift? FOR ME *.*? THANK YOU! (lol I read it like 2 days ago; I've just been having hangovers for since Wednesday (My friends pulled my out drinking Wed, Tues, Friday AND Saturday!)) - So I hope it's okay the review first came now ^^!
You'd imagine it'd be so much easier not to think back to then, to remember. Yet it is. So many things I didn't say, and the few I did, stupid things from an arrogant teenager.
"Don't tell anyone." I warned once, as if you would have. But you just smiled and nodded, as if I couldn't see the hurt flash through your eyes. *-* See.. THIS is why I both liked and disliked Masamune in his high school/Saga days. Yes he wanted to tell Ritsu all the things he loved about him, how much he treasured his presence, but his stupid teenage arrogance wouldn't allow himself to do it; + Ritsu was so submissive that he would just smile and nod. So sad..
Seeing you brings back so many memories-good and bad. Just catching sight of you a few desks over is enough to make me smile, and watching you walk into the apartment next to mine can bring so much pain… *-* The bittersweet taste of love and acknowledge. I believe this is a way of Ritsu's, to show Masamune how Ritsu felt like in high school. Ritsu loved watching Masamune sitting at his usual table, reading Macbeth or whatever random book; but oh how he wished he could be sitting right next to him reading along..
"Masamune..."
And it's then, in that single call, that I find my 'happily ever after'.
Because I know you still love me too. *-* HAHA! You just know that I love it when we make Ritsu use his first name xD I have a theory that even though Ritsu and Masamune kiss a lot, have sex etc. etc. Ritsu keeps on calling him 'Takano-san', because it's kinda a way for him to still put a wall in between them. I don't believe Ritsu has ever been afraid of calling someone close to him, by first name, but it's just that when Masamune calls Ritsu by his first name, Ritsu gets so submissive and he feels like he looses all the power in his body. So if Masamune can break down some of the wall by calling Ritsu by his first name, then Ritsu calling Masamune for Masamune, would maybe tare that wall even more down.
Lol did I totally analyze this to much? anyways...
I LOVED IT! Thank you so, so, so much sweet heart! THIS was a great little one-shot and oh~~ the ANGST! You just know what I love, now don't ya ;D? Great read! It's in my favorites! So lovely! Thank you!
19cigarettesandlatteA g...gift? FOR ME *.*? THANK YOU! (lol I read it like 2 days ago; I've just been having hangovers for since Wednesday (My friends pulled my out drinking Wed, Tues, Friday AND Saturday!)) - So I hope it's okay the review first came now ^^!
You'd imagine it'd be so much easier not to think back to then, to remember. Yet it is. So many things I didn't say, and the few I did, stupid things from an arrogant teenager.
"Don't tell anyone." I warned once, as if you would have. But you just smiled and nodded, as if I couldn't see the hurt flash through your eyes. *-* See.. THIS is why I both liked and disliked Masamune in his high school/Saga days. Yes he wanted to tell Ritsu all the things he loved about him, how much he treasured his presence, but his stupid teenage arrogance wouldn't allow himself to do it; + Ritsu was so submissive that he would just smile and nod. So sad..
Seeing you brings back so many memories-good and bad. Just catching sight of you a few desks over is enough to make me smile, and watching you walk into the apartment next to mine can bring so much pain… *-* The bittersweet taste of love and acknowledge. I believe this is a way of Ritsu's, to show Masamune how Ritsu felt like in high school. Ritsu loved watching Masamune sitting at his usual table, reading Macbeth or whatever random book; but oh how he wished he could be sitting right next to him reading along..
"Masamune..."
And it's then, in that single call, that I find my 'happily ever after'.
Because I know you still love me too. *-* HAHA! You just know that I love it when we make Ritsu use his first name xD I have a theory that even though Ritsu and Masamune kiss a lot, have sex etc. etc. Ritsu keeps on calling him 'Takano-san', because it's kinda a way for him to still put a wall in between them. I don't believe Ritsu has ever been afraid of calling someone close to him, by first name, but it's just that when Masamune calls Ritsu by his first name, Ritsu gets so submissive and he feels like he looses all the power in his body. So if Masamune can break down some of the wall by calling Ritsu by his first name, then Ritsu calling Masamune for Masamune, would maybe tare that wall even more down.
Lol did I totally analyze this to much? anyways...
I LOVED IT! Thank you so, so, so much sweet heart! THIS was a great little one-shot and oh~~ the ANGST! You just know what I love, now don't ya ;D? Great read! It's in my favorites! So lovely! Thank you!
2/11/2012 c1 MyNameIsSara
I liked it. But what I don't understand, is this sentence; 'So adorable, so you.'... What does it even mean? Have you misspelled or something?
I liked it. But what I don't understand, is this sentence; 'So adorable, so you.'... What does it even mean? Have you misspelled or something?
2/11/2012 c1 14Everlasting Snow Princess
AWWWW! It is so sweet. I LOVE IT! It is so touching! The words describe Takano's heart completely!
14Everlasting Snow PrincessAWWWW! It is so sweet. I LOVE IT! It is so touching! The words describe Takano's heart completely!