for Clean version of My Immortal9/12/2014 c1 listeninggame
Oh my gosh! This is a genius idea! We must enlighten and corrupt the children all at the same time! Slowly though. Pile it on slowly. I hear some kids explode when they're in direct contact with too much stupidity. My Immortal is the best. I love reading stories where people actually think it's good and it stinks. Tara is awesome for giving us this laughter. And you are awesome for in turn giving it to the children. Oh, poor children. What did you walk into?
Oh my gosh! This is a genius idea! We must enlighten and corrupt the children all at the same time! Slowly though. Pile it on slowly. I hear some kids explode when they're in direct contact with too much stupidity. My Immortal is the best. I love reading stories where people actually think it's good and it stinks. Tara is awesome for giving us this laughter. And you are awesome for in turn giving it to the children. Oh, poor children. What did you walk into?
2/11/2012 c1 lol
Ok first chapter and ive already noticed youve censored the word "hell" but left the word "fucking" as is. So its hardly a clean version
Ok first chapter and ive already noticed youve censored the word "hell" but left the word "fucking" as is. So its hardly a clean version
2/11/2012 c2 
7kaja1234
Nope, still feeling my iq drop. Please light this piece of shit on fire, don't bother to piss on it cause it's not even worth that. Move on young writer, from this utter monstrosity.
7kaja1234Nope, still feeling my iq drop. Please light this piece of shit on fire, don't bother to piss on it cause it's not even worth that. Move on young writer, from this utter monstrosity.
2/11/2012 c2 kaja1234
Nope, still feeling my iq drop. Please light this piece of shit on fire, don't bother to piss on it cause it's not even worth that. Move on young writer, from this utter monstrosity.
Nope, still feeling my iq drop. Please light this piece of shit on fire, don't bother to piss on it cause it's not even worth that. Move on young writer, from this utter monstrosity.
2/11/2012 c1 6Curiouser-and-Curiouser101
Nope, even with some grammer corrections and the bleeping out of cuss words it still is a horrible story. I'm sorry but i dont think there is any fixing this.
6Curiouser-and-Curiouser101Nope, even with some grammer corrections and the bleeping out of cuss words it still is a horrible story. I'm sorry but i dont think there is any fixing this.