
7/16/2019 c2 HyperA2019
I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto learns about Nightmare Moons sister Solar flare.
I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto learns about Nightmare Moons sister Solar flare.
6/3/2019 c1 HyperA2019
I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto create his own magic spells.
I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto create his own magic spells.
3/30/2019 c8
1Edmonton58
i know the creatures you are describing are a Mareep and a Charizard from Pokemon so the island that they came from is probably connected to one of the regions.

i know the creatures you are describing are a Mareep and a Charizard from Pokemon so the island that they came from is probably connected to one of the regions.
9/9/2017 c1
21HyperA1985
I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto has a relationship with Princess Molestia.

I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto has a relationship with Princess Molestia.
5/30/2017 c8 Guest
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5/4/2017 c8
55iamgoku
despite the fact that this fic hasn't been updated in 4 years, I am holding onto hope that it will be.
I love your story, a great mix of humor and fun, along with the regular trials and tribulations of living in ponyvlle. I'd say Naruto is definitley going to continue to add to that XD
The ending of this chapter, such a cliffhanger! Naruto isn't the only one who made a new friend
As I said before, I do hope you are able to update this one day, as it's a great read

despite the fact that this fic hasn't been updated in 4 years, I am holding onto hope that it will be.
I love your story, a great mix of humor and fun, along with the regular trials and tribulations of living in ponyvlle. I'd say Naruto is definitley going to continue to add to that XD
The ending of this chapter, such a cliffhanger! Naruto isn't the only one who made a new friend
As I said before, I do hope you are able to update this one day, as it's a great read
7/28/2016 c6
26JensenDaniels32
AWESOME! Also, Happy 250th Review! If you're still around, please upload chapter 9.

AWESOME! Also, Happy 250th Review! If you're still around, please upload chapter 9.
10/26/2015 c8 godzillafan1
I've read this on fim pretty good story but when are you going to do the next chapter? that mystery little electric sheep's description reminded of a pokemon I've seen flaffy I think it was called also fluttershy and naruto make a nice couple by the way well I hope you'll write what happens next very soon.
I've read this on fim pretty good story but when are you going to do the next chapter? that mystery little electric sheep's description reminded of a pokemon I've seen flaffy I think it was called also fluttershy and naruto make a nice couple by the way well I hope you'll write what happens next very soon.
9/23/2015 c7
2numair2304
I like the thought that went into this story. The interactions between the characters are fun. The fact that you bring up the fact that humans are omnivores and what that diet entails, meat. Of all the crossovers I've read yours is the only one to truly bring up that concept and Naruto's reaction when he realises is I believe is an extremly realistic description. I doubt that you are going to continue this seeing how long its been left but I was hoping that you might have a simple plot outline that could be posted to show where the story would have gone.

I like the thought that went into this story. The interactions between the characters are fun. The fact that you bring up the fact that humans are omnivores and what that diet entails, meat. Of all the crossovers I've read yours is the only one to truly bring up that concept and Naruto's reaction when he realises is I believe is an extremly realistic description. I doubt that you are going to continue this seeing how long its been left but I was hoping that you might have a simple plot outline that could be posted to show where the story would have gone.
5/22/2015 c8 Guest
PLEASE CONTINUE!
If you don't I'll haunt you in your sleep!
PLEASE CONTINUE!
If you don't I'll haunt you in your sleep!