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6/28/2023 c1 Guest
Ship it. Alice x Hamish ascot sounds funny.
4/16/2020 c1 5Micheala Regier1
it was okay... i with it had been broke into paragraphs. other than that it was a good story
3/24/2013 c1 holly
cool ive read it anyway. my school is acting i out and im alices mum
3/15/2012 c1 darthsydious
You need to break up the text so it isn't just a mass of words. Specify who is talking With quotation marks and hit ENTER whenever someone new joins a conversation. Otherwise it gets confusing and hard to follow. Just remember to pace yourself. It doesn't have to be told all at once. Get some emotion in too! Everyone starts somewhere!
2/17/2012 c1 21Narnian Pirate
But Hamish is so UGLY! And you kinda rush, it gets confusing.

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