for The Red Calm1/27/2021 c16 TitanGuest912
Very good, It feels just a bit rushed in some places, but it is very well made so far. I hope you do continue the story someday or someone else gets inspiration from it.
Very good, It feels just a bit rushed in some places, but it is very well made so far. I hope you do continue the story someday or someone else gets inspiration from it.
1/27/2021 c1 TitanGuest912
I recommend you listen to (unlike pluto - mindless bliss) while reading this chapter at least.
Great story intro, will be reading the next chapters!
I recommend you listen to (unlike pluto - mindless bliss) while reading this chapter at least.
Great story intro, will be reading the next chapters!
2/23/2020 c1 HAEVs Sha
Sound promising.. But its not finish.. Fck.. Dissapointing.. Are you still alive?
Sound promising.. But its not finish.. Fck.. Dissapointing.. Are you still alive?
5/24/2018 c10 
6Arrexu
I fucking love this!. I don't know whether haku's alive or not but it's tantalising asf!
6ArrexuI fucking love this!. I don't know whether haku's alive or not but it's tantalising asf!
6/7/2017 c16 Sovereign49
In my opinion a very intriguing and unique story. Shame that it was abandoned, would have looked forward to how all this pans out
In my opinion a very intriguing and unique story. Shame that it was abandoned, would have looked forward to how all this pans out
12/4/2016 c15 dontusethissiteanymore
This, this is dark. However, as sad as it is it's a great story, and I think you're great writer because of it.
This, this is dark. However, as sad as it is it's a great story, and I think you're great writer because of it.
12/3/2016 c5 nova
full of anger and hatred all directed to naruto but then it is only a fiction.
full of anger and hatred all directed to naruto but then it is only a fiction.
12/3/2016 c4 nova
man you real are a sad soul to love and bask in melancholy and sadness such as this. i dont usually get sentimental about fanfic but your just dish out more miserableness and sadness for naruto than the actual movie.
man you real are a sad soul to love and bask in melancholy and sadness such as this. i dont usually get sentimental about fanfic but your just dish out more miserableness and sadness for naruto than the actual movie.
6/22/2016 c16 11NXSE
Great Story, one of the few strategic and political stories that managed to capture me. As a fellow author I appreciate the amount of skills you must have put in. A shame really that the reviews and favs are so less, the story deserves far more even if it was incomplete and left abruptly.
11NXSEGreat Story, one of the few strategic and political stories that managed to capture me. As a fellow author I appreciate the amount of skills you must have put in. A shame really that the reviews and favs are so less, the story deserves far more even if it was incomplete and left abruptly.
1/22/2016 c9 44Marching Madly Onward
I have to give you kudos for an incredible first chapter.
The conclusion of the Pain arc was a huge slap in the face for the audience and the characters to see all that sacrifice and all that tension bled away on a bunch of sentimentality that didn't suit Pain at all. So not only did you pick up and fix what was broken, you moved ahead with some absolutely fantastic imagery of the dying leaf and the forests and the mountains they could be. It could have easily become a tortured comparison, but you pulled it off beautifully.
I was really liking it right up until you cheated out Haku's death, which goes against the spirit of this story, and then you turned him into a girl for no good reason. You dropped the ball there.
Dropped.
Oh well, at least the first chapter was beautiful.
44Marching Madly OnwardI have to give you kudos for an incredible first chapter.
The conclusion of the Pain arc was a huge slap in the face for the audience and the characters to see all that sacrifice and all that tension bled away on a bunch of sentimentality that didn't suit Pain at all. So not only did you pick up and fix what was broken, you moved ahead with some absolutely fantastic imagery of the dying leaf and the forests and the mountains they could be. It could have easily become a tortured comparison, but you pulled it off beautifully.
I was really liking it right up until you cheated out Haku's death, which goes against the spirit of this story, and then you turned him into a girl for no good reason. You dropped the ball there.
Dropped.
Oh well, at least the first chapter was beautiful.
9/21/2015 c2 Guest
Depressing shit...
Depressing shit...