for Inside the Insanity2/15/2012 c1 Cat
Thats weird, the outside says that there are three chaps. but the inside says there are only two...
Thats weird, the outside says that there are three chaps. but the inside says there are only two...
2/15/2012 c2 Kathie
Hey! I totally wanted to review for your first chapter, but it said you weren't accepting anonymous reviews, which broke my heart, because I can't get an account, and you are probably the most beautiful writer I have ever read. I am a bit of an *ahem* poem nerd, and I write them myself.
Your poems are so
Beautifully rhythmatic
I can't get enough.
:) The way you interpret the characters and write poems from their POVs is AWESOME. :) Daph isn't this mature, but you are writing it like that, and it's beautiful to read. :) Your rhythm is exceptional. BTW I'm guessing Daphne. :) I also must say that I'm a sucker for stories with NO spelling or grammatical errors. Go you! I HATE ff writers that are great writers, but just can't spell to save their life, or use cellphone / text language, or don't know when to you Daphne and I, rather than me and Daphne (because Sabrina of all people would use grammar correctly, ahem.) BTW I loved loved loved the poem you did from Sabrina's point of view. :)
Can't wait to see if you do a Puck! :) I'll be a regular reviewer from now on. :) Keep writing! :)
Hey! I totally wanted to review for your first chapter, but it said you weren't accepting anonymous reviews, which broke my heart, because I can't get an account, and you are probably the most beautiful writer I have ever read. I am a bit of an *ahem* poem nerd, and I write them myself.
Your poems are so
Beautifully rhythmatic
I can't get enough.
:) The way you interpret the characters and write poems from their POVs is AWESOME. :) Daph isn't this mature, but you are writing it like that, and it's beautiful to read. :) Your rhythm is exceptional. BTW I'm guessing Daphne. :) I also must say that I'm a sucker for stories with NO spelling or grammatical errors. Go you! I HATE ff writers that are great writers, but just can't spell to save their life, or use cellphone / text language, or don't know when to you Daphne and I, rather than me and Daphne (because Sabrina of all people would use grammar correctly, ahem.) BTW I loved loved loved the poem you did from Sabrina's point of view. :)
Can't wait to see if you do a Puck! :) I'll be a regular reviewer from now on. :) Keep writing! :)
2/14/2012 c2 Cat
Okay, that didn't make it any harder, just saying...
I liked how you expressed Daphne's emotions, I've never actually heard it put that way, even though we all know its true.
You should do like, a side character or something. Someone who will give enough away, yet not make it really easy. Because, when you tell us to guess, we automatically think about how the MAIN characters apply. We don't think about Bluebeard, Bess, the Gingerbread Man, or other side characters could possibly apply. Its just a suggestion.
Okay, that didn't make it any harder, just saying...
I liked how you expressed Daphne's emotions, I've never actually heard it put that way, even though we all know its true.
You should do like, a side character or something. Someone who will give enough away, yet not make it really easy. Because, when you tell us to guess, we automatically think about how the MAIN characters apply. We don't think about Bluebeard, Bess, the Gingerbread Man, or other side characters could possibly apply. Its just a suggestion.
2/14/2012 c2 
26Lara D
Lol, I loved your bottom A/N. XD
Daphne. Yep. I'm going to hold you accountable for that -make guessing harder! ^^
Very nice poem! Mucho gravy!
-Lara
26Lara DLol, I loved your bottom A/N. XD
Daphne. Yep. I'm going to hold you accountable for that -make guessing harder! ^^
Very nice poem! Mucho gravy!
-Lara
2/14/2012 c2 6TheAfterShock
The first one was a poem for Sabrina then Daphne. I really like these, they're really cute! This is Red btw not Cat, cuz I bed she already reviewed for you anyway, good job love it keep going and I'm subscribing to you now, so yeah.
~Red
6TheAfterShockThe first one was a poem for Sabrina then Daphne. I really like these, they're really cute! This is Red btw not Cat, cuz I bed she already reviewed for you anyway, good job love it keep going and I'm subscribing to you now, so yeah.
~Red
2/14/2012 c1 ANannyMouse
Well that's easy. Sabrina! Haha, but people already said that, I'm assuming.
I like your idea of writing a poem for each character. And even though I'm not really well-versed (PUN!) in poetry, I think that you did a good job.
Actually, you should be feeling extremely amazed right now that I WILLINGLY read poetry, and I LIKED it. Me and that stuff don't usually mix. But you did a good job with it. So good job. :D
Well that's easy. Sabrina! Haha, but people already said that, I'm assuming.
I like your idea of writing a poem for each character. And even though I'm not really well-versed (PUN!) in poetry, I think that you did a good job.
Actually, you should be feeling extremely amazed right now that I WILLINGLY read poetry, and I LIKED it. Me and that stuff don't usually mix. But you did a good job with it. So good job. :D
2/13/2012 c1 emilydd
This was excellent! I really enjoyed it, and I thought your A/N was hilarious! Great job you get a gold star sticker *sticks it on your forhead while grinning*! =)
This was excellent! I really enjoyed it, and I thought your A/N was hilarious! Great job you get a gold star sticker *sticks it on your forhead while grinning*! =)
2/13/2012 c1 TheAfterShock
Ha! See I follow your every command! YOU WISH!
Sabrinnnna! It's definately about Sabrina. I like it a lot. I thought it was really creative. The only error I remember seeing is you spelt 'Granny' with a little 'g.'
I loved the line, 'Granny, who lovingly poisons me' I actually lol-ed. Usually I dont actually lol. I liked the way the poem was written, it had feeling in it. Good job.
Ha! See I follow your every command! YOU WISH!
Sabrinnnna! It's definately about Sabrina. I like it a lot. I thought it was really creative. The only error I remember seeing is you spelt 'Granny' with a little 'g.'
I loved the line, 'Granny, who lovingly poisons me' I actually lol-ed. Usually I dont actually lol. I liked the way the poem was written, it had feeling in it. Good job.