for You love me, what?2/28/2015 c2 
20Bibbledoo
I wonder what's up with Lee.
I hope you will update sometime.
Just get a few spelling and punctuation checks and you should be good to go.
20BibbledooI wonder what's up with Lee.
I hope you will update sometime.
Just get a few spelling and punctuation checks and you should be good to go.
12/6/2013 c2 20little miss BANANNA HEAD
This chapter had many less mistakes than the last, but the punctuation is one of the main focuses. The improvement was very dramatic and was really good. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is a very exciting story, even though I really hate Valentines day (loner kid, no one likes me). Most of the stories for Detentionaire, however, are Valentines related so there isn't much choice but to read them. They're really good, though, so I don't really mind. It's just the day in general that gets me bugged.
20little miss BANANNA HEADThis chapter had many less mistakes than the last, but the punctuation is one of the main focuses. The improvement was very dramatic and was really good. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is a very exciting story, even though I really hate Valentines day (loner kid, no one likes me). Most of the stories for Detentionaire, however, are Valentines related so there isn't much choice but to read them. They're really good, though, so I don't really mind. It's just the day in general that gets me bugged.
12/6/2013 c1 little miss BANANNA HEAD
I don't really mind the punctuation, but to stop flamers and idiots who like to cuss in their reviews, I suggest you edit this chapter and make sure that all the correct punctuation is there. I found this quite enjoyable to read and liked the descriptions used, it's just the punctuation and some of the spelling that needs a little work. This is strictly constructive criticism used to prevent flamers from bringing authors down. Flamers are bad people who say people's stories are crap and personally, I wish there weren't flamers. They hurt people and its kinda sad.
I don't really mind the punctuation, but to stop flamers and idiots who like to cuss in their reviews, I suggest you edit this chapter and make sure that all the correct punctuation is there. I found this quite enjoyable to read and liked the descriptions used, it's just the punctuation and some of the spelling that needs a little work. This is strictly constructive criticism used to prevent flamers from bringing authors down. Flamers are bad people who say people's stories are crap and personally, I wish there weren't flamers. They hurt people and its kinda sad.
3/12/2012 c2 Guest
Make another one please but make this one like Biffs point of view!
Make another one please but make this one like Biffs point of view!
3/1/2012 c1 Otaku Maiden
Although there are some grammatical errors that need to be fixed, I like this story so far. I like to see how the direction goes.
Although there are some grammatical errors that need to be fixed, I like this story so far. I like to see how the direction goes.
2/14/2012 c2 18Sorrowful Cheshire
its okay but really girl you can edit your stories when you upload them
i love it
dna woh tuoba elihw yeht era gnithgif revo ginP rehtona yug semoc ni dna sekam eel llaf rof mih
owe sorry for my mistakes *wink*
18Sorrowful Cheshireits okay but really girl you can edit your stories when you upload them
i love it
dna woh tuoba elihw yeht era gnithgif revo ginP rehtona yug semoc ni dna sekam eel llaf rof mih
owe sorry for my mistakes *wink*
2/13/2012 c1 Sorrowful Cheshire
why you sneaky little.. i really like it but it was kind of confusing try putting quotes around the talking.
Loved it look out for my story
why you sneaky little.. i really like it but it was kind of confusing try putting quotes around the talking.
Loved it look out for my story