Reviews: Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story

for Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story

12/16/2019 c1 Guest
You swicted his name from Matthew to albus in the middle of the chapter... Why? You should keep it consistent or people will get confused

7/6/2018 c1 Gekko9
3 paragraph, last sentence: ..., dawning realization that Peter had betrayed them.

6/9/2017 c4 TheGemNara
I Onyx OpalLeficent Ciphadonyx. Pledge Harry Potter to the Ancient and Noble House of Ravenclaw

1/25/2017 c2 ninja888
Albus Severus, really? You are extremely unimaginative.

3/14/2016 c1 Kenji Tarugo
Albus Severus? Really? Are you that short in creativity that you would think that James Potter would name his son as Albus Severus? Incredibly preposterous.

12/17/2015 c4 HP Fangirl
The beginning chapters were amazing, well written, and then there was this sudden decrease in the quality of the writing... What happened? I stopped reading around chapter twelve: the chapters became shorter and poorly written... You started off so well, I was interested in this story until the A.N., then everything went down hill...

11/8/2015 c16 tiara123458
...Its been 2 years. : Update please! This is amazing! :)

3/9/2015 c4

4narutoxsasuke124
what about Sly

3/9/2015 c3 narutoxsasuke124
did do not love him and they know it

3/9/2015 c1 narutoxsasuke124
it is cool

2/22/2015 c16 percab8531
Continue this

1/28/2015 c5 Hero Dean
viktor krum

6/7/2014 c9 Witchchild1234
Update some more! It's really good.

4/13/2014 c2

1ImaGreekmyth
I read the bold and you keep saying Harry's twins name is Albus Severus "Sirius" but in the story it is Matthew. Could you explain to me?

2/4/2014 c10

13Caerulum D
...A little short?
Still, love the story so far.

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