for Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story5/12/2012 c2 Levarne
The name Albus Sirius Potter makes sense but not Albus Severus Potter. You must be a big fan of Snape. I don't like this story already. Tata!
The name Albus Sirius Potter makes sense but not Albus Severus Potter. You must be a big fan of Snape. I don't like this story already. Tata!
5/12/2012 c4 Karunia
Your Hermione is extremely annoying. It is rude to point out someone's social deficiency to people who are actually friendly to her.
Your Hermione is extremely annoying. It is rude to point out someone's social deficiency to people who are actually friendly to her.
5/8/2012 c1 isabela
WOWWWWWWW perfect, i just lovvvvvve this... MOOOORE PLEASE!
WOWWWWWWW perfect, i just lovvvvvve this... MOOOORE PLEASE!
5/8/2012 c6 autumngold
I'm so glad Harry is in Ravenclaw, great choice! Now at least he won't have to deal with Albus so much. I hope that Dumbledore doesn't make the teachers give in to all of Albus' demands. He is already a brat, I just hope that Hogwarts doesn't make him worse.
Thank you for your new chapter! I can't wait to read more!
I'm so glad Harry is in Ravenclaw, great choice! Now at least he won't have to deal with Albus so much. I hope that Dumbledore doesn't make the teachers give in to all of Albus' demands. He is already a brat, I just hope that Hogwarts doesn't make him worse.
Thank you for your new chapter! I can't wait to read more!
5/1/2012 c5 
7Teufel1987
Nice ...
Padma being Gryffindor-ish instead of Parvati (who actually is in Gryffindor) is an interesting twist ... Though I really don't care for the labelling of a person based on house (example, calling them Gryffindor or Slytherin etc) it's a bit stupid and sort of limits a character ...
You don't see this in canon ... Nobody is deemed "Gryffindor-ish" or the like ... After all, if you observe the characters, you'll find that they show more than one trait ... Hermione loves to learn, Ron has the ambition of being the best of his brothers, Draco is brash and bold, and Harry is sneaky, a bit manipulative and isn't above blackmail...
Anyway nice chapter ...
7Teufel1987Nice ...
Padma being Gryffindor-ish instead of Parvati (who actually is in Gryffindor) is an interesting twist ... Though I really don't care for the labelling of a person based on house (example, calling them Gryffindor or Slytherin etc) it's a bit stupid and sort of limits a character ...
You don't see this in canon ... Nobody is deemed "Gryffindor-ish" or the like ... After all, if you observe the characters, you'll find that they show more than one trait ... Hermione loves to learn, Ron has the ambition of being the best of his brothers, Draco is brash and bold, and Harry is sneaky, a bit manipulative and isn't above blackmail...
Anyway nice chapter ...
5/1/2012 c5 Reader AZ
I hope you don’t put him in Slytherin as there are so many of those.
If he wants attention from his parents I am sure he wants positive attention and that is not what he would get there. James hates Slytherins and he would have a harder time than before.
If he was in Ravenclaw they would at least know he had brains.
As he is the real BWL he would also not be safe in Slytherin as he would be with all the death eater’s kids. It would be so easy for them to get to him.
When they find out who in the real BWL his brother may be jealous and Harry being in Slytherin would only make things worse.
I hope you don’t put him in Slytherin as there are so many of those.
If he wants attention from his parents I am sure he wants positive attention and that is not what he would get there. James hates Slytherins and he would have a harder time than before.
If he was in Ravenclaw they would at least know he had brains.
As he is the real BWL he would also not be safe in Slytherin as he would be with all the death eater’s kids. It would be so easy for them to get to him.
When they find out who in the real BWL his brother may be jealous and Harry being in Slytherin would only make things worse.
5/1/2012 c5 autumngold
I'm so glad that you are not going to have Harry in Griffindor. I have a feeling that it doesn't matter what house he is sorted into, he still won't win his parent's support. Thank you for the update!
I'm so glad that you are not going to have Harry in Griffindor. I have a feeling that it doesn't matter what house he is sorted into, he still won't win his parent's support. Thank you for the update!
4/26/2012 c1 Impressionist
So many names and all you can come up for Harry's brother's name is Albus Severus. James will not name his son Severus and while Lily used to be friend with Snape, she will not name her son after the man who called her a mudblood. What were you thinking?
So many names and all you can come up for Harry's brother's name is Albus Severus. James will not name his son Severus and while Lily used to be friend with Snape, she will not name her son after the man who called her a mudblood. What were you thinking?
4/24/2012 c4 autumngold
Boy, Hermione sure is a little know-it-all isn't she. Poor Harry, I hope he doesn't get stuck with her as a friend. Hopefully she will just start hanging around his brother! Thank you for the update! Please post again soon!
Boy, Hermione sure is a little know-it-all isn't she. Poor Harry, I hope he doesn't get stuck with her as a friend. Hopefully she will just start hanging around his brother! Thank you for the update! Please post again soon!
4/24/2012 c4 xXGred-ForgeXx
YAY! Weasley twins! ^.^ At least they are nice unlike another ginger.. Harry, in my opinion, should still be a Gryffindor.
YAY! Weasley twins! ^.^ At least they are nice unlike another ginger.. Harry, in my opinion, should still be a Gryffindor.
4/24/2012 c4 2TheOtherGuyHulk
Hi I was deliberating on what house he should raveclaw would suit him alright but he'd never get out of his brothers shadow and I feel like he has the drive and motivation of a slytherin and wants to step out of albus' shadow so I personally feel Slytherin would highlight his best features which are his abilities to outshine on pure talent but always with a motive like a Slytherin. He doesn't show enough loyalty as a hufflepuff since he doesn't show any to his brother the supposed savior and the family of light. Not gryffindor he's far too calm and didn't act all boisterous when getting a hit by his brother. Plus in slytherin his family might finally pay attention to him and show he's his own man. Continue the good work. Not all slytherins are evil.
2TheOtherGuyHulkHi I was deliberating on what house he should raveclaw would suit him alright but he'd never get out of his brothers shadow and I feel like he has the drive and motivation of a slytherin and wants to step out of albus' shadow so I personally feel Slytherin would highlight his best features which are his abilities to outshine on pure talent but always with a motive like a Slytherin. He doesn't show enough loyalty as a hufflepuff since he doesn't show any to his brother the supposed savior and the family of light. Not gryffindor he's far too calm and didn't act all boisterous when getting a hit by his brother. Plus in slytherin his family might finally pay attention to him and show he's his own man. Continue the good work. Not all slytherins are evil.
4/24/2012 c4 2Anonymous0786
please put him in slytherin, if not then do me one favour and at least let both Potters be in the quidditch team I want harry to win against his brother.
2Anonymous0786please put him in slytherin, if not then do me one favour and at least let both Potters be in the quidditch team I want harry to win against his brother.
4/18/2012 c3 HeartsGlow
Boy! Some of your reviewers REALLY need to get a grip! I suppose it's beyond their feeble minds to understand that if the Potters are alive, this is NOT canon. Furthermore, who's to say that Lily and Sev didn't make up later in school? How do they KNOW that Sev wasn't a spy all along in this story? (is he?)How can they pick on Sev for bullying a student when it hasn't happened yet? Oh, and I'd rather my child be called Severus than to be called Albus (ugh!)Lastly, many people all over the world name their children after living people that they admire. Why should the Potters be any different? OK, then. Perhaps some of my points are far off from what you intended, but I'm just saying what COULD be read between the lines. If people only wanted to read canon, it'd soon be pretty boring on this site.
Boy! Some of your reviewers REALLY need to get a grip! I suppose it's beyond their feeble minds to understand that if the Potters are alive, this is NOT canon. Furthermore, who's to say that Lily and Sev didn't make up later in school? How do they KNOW that Sev wasn't a spy all along in this story? (is he?)How can they pick on Sev for bullying a student when it hasn't happened yet? Oh, and I'd rather my child be called Severus than to be called Albus (ugh!)Lastly, many people all over the world name their children after living people that they admire. Why should the Potters be any different? OK, then. Perhaps some of my points are far off from what you intended, but I'm just saying what COULD be read between the lines. If people only wanted to read canon, it'd soon be pretty boring on this site.