for Just Another Wrong Boy Who Lived Story2/14/2012 c1 fun run
this story is awesome plez countinue
this story is awesome plez countinue
2/14/2012 c1 
10Dark Dragon 4x4
Its ok, the bold to normail then back to bold is distracting, but i can see this story can become great if you work hard.
10Dark Dragon 4x4Its ok, the bold to normail then back to bold is distracting, but i can see this story can become great if you work hard.
2/14/2012 c1 Reader AZ
Why in the world did you call the other boy Albus Severus? James hated Severus and Albus was still alive and healthy. Harry called his son that because he knew the truth about how both of them had worked hard to keep him alive although not always happy.
I find the bold distracting.
It will be interesing to see if you make this one different from the many twin stories.
Why in the world did you call the other boy Albus Severus? James hated Severus and Albus was still alive and healthy. Harry called his son that because he knew the truth about how both of them had worked hard to keep him alive although not always happy.
I find the bold distracting.
It will be interesing to see if you make this one different from the many twin stories.