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3/9/2012 c1 1Inazumafever
in the dub Gazel is a girl
2/21/2012 c1 4Birdincage2903
Oh I have been waiting for this! Srr that I couldn't review sooner, I have been quite busy.

Gazel and Midorikawa? Hiroto and Burn? (Fudou and bench?) Man this got to be the weirdest couples I have ever seen. But it's interesting and I can't wait to see what will happen to them. (just be sure to bring Hiromido back to me ok! ^^)
2/20/2012 c1 7TheKazemaruSiblings
Isabella: this

NJ: is

Kazemaru: so

All three: KAWIII!

Isabella: that part with Hiroto made me bright red it was so cute I loved it

NJ: the tiger is just so AWWW

Kazemaru: this so epic and awesomwe

Isabella: I
2/15/2012 c1 2xMapleSerapx
Aww, I liked this! :D

The way they were all blushing was really sweet! But you could also try using different words for how they blush. Like "Toramaru turned bright pink." Or "Toramaru was flushing red."

And other than a few grammar/spelling errors, this was really cute! Awesome job bro!

Ja nee~
2/15/2012 c1 23StarLikeShadow
Star: such a sweet story!

Kagaya: oh no...

Star: and by the way...MAKE IT MAKE IT MAKE IT MAKE IT! *keeps chanting*

Kagaya: *covering his ears* oh God spear ME!

Aphrodi: *sneezes*

Kagaya: GOD GET OUT OF HERE!

Star: DON'T TALK TO HIM LIKE THAT!

Twins: *starts fighting and ends us into a wrestling match where Star was winning*

Aphrodi and Haruna: *sweat drop* ...I'm pretty sure they wanted to say that this is a very good story and they can't wait to read more from you guys...

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