for FF7 goes to a football game (part 1)12/15/2003 c1 ClerisFan
Oh no you didn't! Did you just call Aeris a slut? Tifa is the REAL slut around here. You'd better learn your Final Fantasy geograpy, man. I have reviewed you before with my signed-in name, so go ahead and flame me if you ever find out who I am.
Oh no you didn't! Did you just call Aeris a slut? Tifa is the REAL slut around here. You'd better learn your Final Fantasy geograpy, man. I have reviewed you before with my signed-in name, so go ahead and flame me if you ever find out who I am.
12/6/2003 c1 
1trixieshairflip
1: Aeris rules.
2: You suck
3: read my bio, you'll understand why I am a Cleris person.
4: I am terribly sorry, BUT YOU ARE NOT FUNNY!
5: What have you been learning in school?
6: CLERIS FOREVER! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Leaves)
1trixieshairflip1: Aeris rules.
2: You suck
3: read my bio, you'll understand why I am a Cleris person.
4: I am terribly sorry, BUT YOU ARE NOT FUNNY!
5: What have you been learning in school?
6: CLERIS FOREVER! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Leaves)
9/22/2003 c1 yesyousuckXD
Once again, yet another one of your pathetic stories!
LEARN HOW TO WRITE!
(And I agree with that one review that says: What kind of loser reviews his own story?) XD XD XD XD
Once again, yet another one of your pathetic stories!
LEARN HOW TO WRITE!
(And I agree with that one review that says: What kind of loser reviews his own story?) XD XD XD XD
6/19/2003 c1 17DigitalAnimeFox
-sniggers- This was quite interesting ^-^ I love FF7 fics, and humor is what I needed to make my night good lol. I'll catch ya later 3
17DigitalAnimeFox-sniggers- This was quite interesting ^-^ I love FF7 fics, and humor is what I needed to make my night good lol. I'll catch ya later 3
10/11/2002 c1 Guest
Maybe you should get someone to proof read this? There's so many grammar and spelling errors that it's not even funny...
And what kinda of loser reviews their own fics
Maybe you should get someone to proof read this? There's so many grammar and spelling errors that it's not even funny...
And what kinda of loser reviews their own fics
9/13/2002 c1 UnknownVietUser
I've seen these type of stories before, it was all a little too rushed, and this is under humor...dear if it is under humor there has to be humor in it. Did that ever occur to you? Maybe you have a friend that could proof read it and...maybe give you hints and tips on improving this? Dont want to sound mean but I've seen seven-year old kids write a nice detailed story...so I'm not sure how old you are.
But hey then again there are those who are truly gifted in writing and those of us who are not capable of writing a story that is interesting and full of suspense. If you were to add another chapter or something brush up a...LOT... on your work. I'm not even sure you tried on this story...most of the time when you are writing a story it isn't really interesting with your self-insertions.
But hey whatever floats your boat. You really should try to improve a lot more
UVU
I've seen these type of stories before, it was all a little too rushed, and this is under humor...dear if it is under humor there has to be humor in it. Did that ever occur to you? Maybe you have a friend that could proof read it and...maybe give you hints and tips on improving this? Dont want to sound mean but I've seen seven-year old kids write a nice detailed story...so I'm not sure how old you are.
But hey then again there are those who are truly gifted in writing and those of us who are not capable of writing a story that is interesting and full of suspense. If you were to add another chapter or something brush up a...LOT... on your work. I'm not even sure you tried on this story...most of the time when you are writing a story it isn't really interesting with your self-insertions.
But hey whatever floats your boat. You really should try to improve a lot more
UVU
12/30/2001 c1 Flesh-N-Bone
::Grumbles:: That was horrible... I shoulda really re-thought that before I wrote it. Hophfully Ill do better in the future. The only thing I found slightly amusing was the Janet Reno joke
::Grumbles:: That was horrible... I shoulda really re-thought that before I wrote it. Hophfully Ill do better in the future. The only thing I found slightly amusing was the Janet Reno joke
3/5/2001 c1 Senshi Saturn
*shakes head sadly at this pitiful, crappy fic.*
Dude, your "fic" here Fucking sucks. Learn some decent grammer, as well as punctuation. Not only that, but it isnt funny in the slightest sense. You said you would write a part 2 if you got enough reviews, but for God's sake, DONT. Everyone hates it, and writing a sequel will only lower your self-esteem even more...not to mention you'll be getting an ass-load of flames from ME. Wanna Bitch about my review? Go ahead, i dont give a rat's ass. Grow up, , and I hope you learn how to use punctuation marks before you're 12. You *really* aren't any older than that, are you? O_o (And lastly, just to spite you: STEELERS SUCK ASS! Mwahaha!)
*shakes head sadly at this pitiful, crappy fic.*
Dude, your "fic" here Fucking sucks. Learn some decent grammer, as well as punctuation. Not only that, but it isnt funny in the slightest sense. You said you would write a part 2 if you got enough reviews, but for God's sake, DONT. Everyone hates it, and writing a sequel will only lower your self-esteem even more...not to mention you'll be getting an ass-load of flames from ME. Wanna Bitch about my review? Go ahead, i dont give a rat's ass. Grow up, , and I hope you learn how to use punctuation marks before you're 12. You *really* aren't any older than that, are you? O_o (And lastly, just to spite you: STEELERS SUCK ASS! Mwahaha!)
1/28/2001 c1 B.IGTiMEr
This is Flesh-N-Bone ummm I think I'm going to discontinue this fanfic. If I get .41 requests I'll recontinue it again... So prey that I won't get .41 requests. So that would be pretty much just 1 review regaurdless of what they say. I need .41 reviews within 1 month
This is Flesh-N-Bone ummm I think I'm going to discontinue this fanfic. If I get .41 requests I'll recontinue it again... So prey that I won't get .41 requests. So that would be pretty much just 1 review regaurdless of what they say. I need .41 reviews within 1 month
12/31/2000 c1 TheGreatWishbone and the moro
I think this is the best story ever written... wait no I don't... I'm the author of the story trying to give myself a good review under descuise.
I think this is the best story ever written... wait no I don't... I'm the author of the story trying to give myself a good review under descuise.
12/3/2000 c1 Crisis
Hehehe that was funny~! I hope you'll make chapter two soon~! I'll be waiting ::sits on chair staring at screen waitint for chapter two...:::
Hehehe that was funny~! I hope you'll make chapter two soon~! I'll be waiting ::sits on chair staring at screen waitint for chapter two...:::
11/10/2000 c1 Link of Shadow
hmm... it wasn't very tasteful, along with self-insertion to add to the mix.. umm, i think you should rethink this whole story for a few days, and put in less bashing-humor, cuz' it's not tasteful if it ain't funny! :D! bye
hmm... it wasn't very tasteful, along with self-insertion to add to the mix.. umm, i think you should rethink this whole story for a few days, and put in less bashing-humor, cuz' it's not tasteful if it ain't funny! :D! bye