for Total Drama Pokemon Island5/17/2012 c1 
2Pixel Katana
Argh... first review (and stuff).
I actually like how you've managed to give the different Pokemon very defined (if a little cliched) personalities in a reasonably short amount of text. There is perhaps a little to much dialogue...? I mean, it's almost all speech. Possibly work on some elongated descriptions? Metaphors and the like?
Other than that, I like it. Not really familiar with TDI, but as a long-time Pokefan I love how you've presented them.
Oh, and check your spellings! (Wow, that came out even more pedantic than I was expecting. Damn.)
2Pixel KatanaArgh... first review (and stuff).
I actually like how you've managed to give the different Pokemon very defined (if a little cliched) personalities in a reasonably short amount of text. There is perhaps a little to much dialogue...? I mean, it's almost all speech. Possibly work on some elongated descriptions? Metaphors and the like?
Other than that, I like it. Not really familiar with TDI, but as a long-time Pokefan I love how you've presented them.
Oh, and check your spellings! (Wow, that came out even more pedantic than I was expecting. Damn.)
3/13/2012 c1 1Anazuma
Hehehe, Dark Amphithere does seem to have inspired a fair few people to write stories, hm?
I'm going to wait until the next challenge for my true first opinions of the characters, but please, keep writing! It's looking really good so far! (Even though its only the first chapter, so what? It looks like it'll be a great story)
Anyways, I hope you keep updating, and I'll go into more... specific stuff the next review. XD I do like how you made a second part of the challenge to actually MAKE the hot tub which was the reward. Please keep writing this!
1AnazumaHehehe, Dark Amphithere does seem to have inspired a fair few people to write stories, hm?
I'm going to wait until the next challenge for my true first opinions of the characters, but please, keep writing! It's looking really good so far! (Even though its only the first chapter, so what? It looks like it'll be a great story)
Anyways, I hope you keep updating, and I'll go into more... specific stuff the next review. XD I do like how you made a second part of the challenge to actually MAKE the hot tub which was the reward. Please keep writing this!