
10/5/2016 c3 IAmCayj
*cough* Mary Sue warning *cough* seriously? an OC who's just so perfect and caring and uhoh we better be scared of her *sigh and yawn* not trying to be offensive at all but she's just so unnecessary
*cough* Mary Sue warning *cough* seriously? an OC who's just so perfect and caring and uhoh we better be scared of her *sigh and yawn* not trying to be offensive at all but she's just so unnecessary
10/13/2015 c5 Vonnie
Good story. Hope Gibbs find Tony soon so he can be there for him. Gibbs knows he's the father right? Jimmy is in on it too? Getting good. Hope to read more.
Good story. Hope Gibbs find Tony soon so he can be there for him. Gibbs knows he's the father right? Jimmy is in on it too? Getting good. Hope to read more.
5/28/2014 c5 yokmeilee
Please continue the story. i would love to see what happens next and how it all ends. Hopefully a happy one!
Please continue the story. i would love to see what happens next and how it all ends. Hopefully a happy one!
10/4/2013 c5 serena23
Please update this story again soon. I have really enjoyed reading it and can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update this story again soon. I have really enjoyed reading it and can't wait to see what happens next.
7/17/2013 c5
9maryhell
I have just read your story and think it is brilliant. I am hook line and sinkered into it.
Please continue it.

I have just read your story and think it is brilliant. I am hook line and sinkered into it.
Please continue it.
6/26/2013 c5 Guest
OMG I NEED MORE! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON WAHHH THIS IS SOO GOOODDDDDDDD
OMG I NEED MORE! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON WAHHH THIS IS SOO GOOODDDDDDDD
3/17/2013 c5 nn n
great story, please continue, i hope that tony will be happy with gibbs and their doter ;)
great story, please continue, i hope that tony will be happy with gibbs and their doter ;)
2/22/2013 c5 lolo
I love where this story is going cant wait to read the next ch
I love where this story is going cant wait to read the next ch