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8/15/2012 c1 FrozenxRose
Good story :)
But I think this story speed things up too much
For one, you don't hug a stranger you just meet 5 minutes ago
In my place at least :)
Sorry for my whines :)
Overall a good story indeed :)
6/30/2012 c1 6Wisteria Blossom
Awwwww!
6/25/2012 c1 4yayaluva
Definitely no flaming going on here.

Naw what a cute Tadase and Nadeshiko fic.

I love this bit:

Because, face it, this perfect reputation has to be kept up with, even if I'm not perfect, I still have to act it.

100% perfect, A, I don't even know I just loved it soo much!

If I had to describe it in one word: Bulls eye.

It was great.

- yayaluva.
3/27/2012 c1 Nomorestoriesfriends
LIKED IT. It so sweet and gentle.
2/18/2012 c1 3Key to the Rose-Colored Clock
Hmmm~

I'm not neutral about this chapter. I genuinely liked it. But I do have a few words of advice.

Your punctuation is off here-and-there. A Beta could fix that, but so could re-reading it a few times and asking yourself "Does this sound right"?

Practice* not practise.

I like the way you portray Tadase. He's so calm. It really feels like he's at peace with who he is. Does that make any sense?

A few times while reading I thought to myself "Well, that's a good word, but I think - might have been better for the sentence."

Overall I really enjoyed it and I'm interested to see the next chapter.

~Key to the Rose-Colored Clock

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