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4/13/2005 c6 Mrs.Samantha Kaiba
that was hilariuos 'my sides hurt so bad from laughing'still giggling' i can picture the boys in those out fits lol LOL he ha hahe bwahaahahahah! @ ^_^ LOL
7/12/2003 c6 2Crazy Meghan
Great ending, just thought I would say that.

CrazyMeghan.
7/12/2003 c5 Crazy Meghan
Great chapter again, you are reallygood at making stories.

Your friend crazymeghan.
7/12/2003 c4 Crazy Meghan
great chapter, But why am I not on you favorite authors list.

Meghan

You know from school.
4/29/2003 c1 2The Incurable Romantic
AND WHERE AM I IN YOUR LITTLE FAVORITE AUTHORS LIST? HONESTLY,SHOW A LITTLE RESPECT TO YOUR FRIENDS HERE! I'M NOT THAT BAD YOU KNOW!
2/13/2003 c3 Duchess Of Cod
Hay it's me again,

Found more grammer problems. For instance you put "Get the hell the road you assholes!", shouldn't it be "Get the hell off the road assholes!".

That's all I found.

You know a way to reduce these mastakes is to reread your work before submitting it.

Hey haven't you been telling me that, anyways see ya.

Your friend,

Duchess Of Cod.
2/13/2003 c2 Duchess Of Cod
Hi D151, It's me your friend DOC( Duchess Of Cod).

I Hate to say this, but you have some grammer mastakes. For instance you said, I"M GET YOU TWO BACK FOR THISS!" It should say "I'M GONNA GET YOU TWO BACK FOR THIS!". Also "Even the wallpaper were covered with bunnies", it should be "Even the wallpaper was covered with bunnies".

But besides that everything was great, keep on writeing.

your friend,

Duchess Of Cod.
1/25/2003 c5 anglcazn
TORTURE SETO! TORTURE YAMI BAKURA! TORTURE!

^_^
10/21/2002 c5 137Earth Star
Funny! I like the line "Tell me, tell me...who doth torture all?" He He.
8/31/2002 c4 Earth Star
Good chapter! You will be rescued! Can't wait till the next chapter. ^_^
8/7/2002 c3 The crazy girl you met at Gamzilla in Moncton
OH MY GOD!...*colapses into a pile of laughter*.. That was hilarious! I loved it! I hope you write more soon! Hehehehe! And you had better not become a Mary Sue! 'cause if you do, I'll burn down the Playboy Mansion...After I get you out of there first.. and Attempt to get you back to your normal self by beating the shit out of Seto.. Hehehehe...anyway keep writing!

-Nicole
5/23/2002 c2 yugi 04
THIS STORY IS SO MUCH FUN.KEEP ON THE WRITTING.
5/19/2002 c1 YYC Leader of S.K.T.S and N.A.R.D.S
^_^ Wheeeee ya gotta do more o dis! I love randomness ^_^

Yugi: You rhymed

YYC: ^_^ Well whadya know? ^_^

Yugi: ~.~;;; You know sometimes I wonder about you

YYC: ^.~ Who cares?

Yugi: ^.^ Good call

Seto: I CARE! YOU'RE ONE CRAZY AUTHOR AND YOU BOTHER ME!

YYC: ¬_¬ You are SO going to pay when I return!

Y. Bakura: I need to get a kiss then I need to ummmmm go further mwaaahahahahhahah

YYC: O.o You wish! *Raises axe and sword*

Y. Bakura: O.O You're getting more and more violent!

YYC: ^_^

-YYC- "Off to kill Y. Bakura now ^_^ Bwaahahahhhahhahah" (Y. Bakura: ~.~;;;;)
5/19/2002 c1 Earth Star
This is going to be a funny story! Please continue!^_^
5/18/2002 c1 purplw
you know that you KILLED SETO really BAD, AN HE JUST HAPPENS TO BE ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS! I WOULD WISH YOU COULD MAKE IT A BETTER STORY...ANW WHAT'S WITH YUGI SAYING " I'M SORRY!" IT ALMOST SHOULDS LIKE YOU AMDE ANOTHER MARY SUE...

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