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5/18/2012 c14 5smithcrafter
Good chapter.
5/18/2012 c14 dpdp
5/18/2012 c14 70ScruffyLovin
Glad to see both Jack and Sam on the mend. And Jack's hard work with Cassie paid off! :) Loved the little Fourth of July scene. :) Thanks for letting us read this chapter early, and I hope your move goes well! :D
5/18/2012 c14 J Throgmorton Sheepdip
What a lovely story - lots of humour - I can clearly visualise the characters reactions and speaking habits. Nice to show Jack as an able leader and teacher, rather than the dummy he clearly prefers others to see.

Thought Carter was a little bit whiney and not so capable as I think she usually is displayed? But the relationship betwwen O'Neill & Carter is very good in the last chapter.

Very entertaining - keep up the good work!
5/13/2012 c13 ScruffyLovin
Glad to see Jack making progress. :) And Cassie, too. hehe. It's definitely done him some good to have a distraction.
5/13/2012 c13 dpdp
Very Nice. more more more please.
5/6/2012 c12 ScruffyLovin
Well, seems like that was quite cathartic for Daniel and Teal'c. :) hehe. Enjoyed the Jack and Sam bonding time in the beginning, too. :)
5/6/2012 c12 dpdp
More more more please.
5/6/2012 c12 sgo
I absolutely love this story. You have done a great job of staying true to the characters and creating a fantastic storyline. The character interactions are perfect. I love the Mansfield line "yeah-you're Jack's boys all right." I can't wait to read the next chapter.
4/29/2012 c11 ScruffyLovin
Yes, Jack! Keep fighting. :D I think it'll be good for both Jack AND Cassie to spend some time together while he's recovering. :)
4/29/2012 c11 dpdp
4/22/2012 c10 104Vinividivinci
Wow - another fabulous chapter. You must have medical training because your descriptions are so real. You also do a great job with the thoughts and feelings (both physical and emotional) of the characters! I'm thoroughly enjoying this!
4/22/2012 c10 70ScruffyLovin
Oh yes, difficult night is an understatement! Sam better take care of herself so she'll be able to help Jack out when the time comes. :) He's really gettin' put through the wringer!
4/22/2012 c10 dpdp
4/19/2012 c9 3WynonaRose
Oh man. Sounds like something is going on with jack.
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