for That Pretty Rage2/19/2012 c1 
52FanficwriterGHC
I love it! I think that's one of the best, most realistic, "this isn't your fight," fights I've ever read. It's perfectly them, and I love the use of the little alcove, and how they can both fit on either side, because they're equal, even in fights and death and all of this.
Wonderfully done.
Emma
52FanficwriterGHCI love it! I think that's one of the best, most realistic, "this isn't your fight," fights I've ever read. It's perfectly them, and I love the use of the little alcove, and how they can both fit on either side, because they're equal, even in fights and death and all of this.
Wonderfully done.
Emma
2/19/2012 c1 41Mark C
This was very sweet.
You did such an excellent job in showing how both Castle and Kate do not want the other to get shot. I especially liked it when he grabbed her and told her that he was her partner and responsibility. That part was well done.
The rest was just them getting their emotions out because of what had happened. I was glad to learn that Castle took a bullet for her and the reason behind it was that she was NOT going to get hit in the vest.
The ending was just perfect.
41Mark CThis was very sweet.
You did such an excellent job in showing how both Castle and Kate do not want the other to get shot. I especially liked it when he grabbed her and told her that he was her partner and responsibility. That part was well done.
The rest was just them getting their emotions out because of what had happened. I was glad to learn that Castle took a bullet for her and the reason behind it was that she was NOT going to get hit in the vest.
The ending was just perfect.
2/19/2012 c1 81822andallthat
How furiously passionate. Wow. Efficient!
My favorite line here : "she's going to eviscerate him, word by ferocious word." Genius :)
81822andallthatHow furiously passionate. Wow. Efficient!
My favorite line here : "she's going to eviscerate him, word by ferocious word." Genius :)
2/19/2012 c1 JeuxDeVagues
Oh, this is great! In a hot, angry, "I will kill you if you die on me" way. Really intense writing style, too, with all of the one-word sentences and the crackling dialogue. And I love, love, love the word "staccato." Thanks for this exciting one-shot!
Oh, this is great! In a hot, angry, "I will kill you if you die on me" way. Really intense writing style, too, with all of the one-word sentences and the crackling dialogue. And I love, love, love the word "staccato." Thanks for this exciting one-shot!
2/19/2012 c1 OCastleD
i don't like these strong emotions you've evoked from me at 11:51 in the morning
i don't like these strong emotions you've evoked from me at 11:51 in the morning
2/19/2012 c1 69liviafan1
See, this is the kind of thing that I could actually see happening on the show, that should happen on the show.
But I'll settle for this because you always write them so well. :)
69liviafan1See, this is the kind of thing that I could actually see happening on the show, that should happen on the show.
But I'll settle for this because you always write them so well. :)