
4/27/2012 c3
10Kaoru97
Aww! Kid can only have one wife! How awkward! But still once again! Great chapter!

Aww! Kid can only have one wife! How awkward! But still once again! Great chapter!
4/27/2012 c1 Kaoru97
Oh my god! I died of laughter while reading this! Your character is soooo cool! And the way you made Soul jealous was soo awesome!
Oh my god! I died of laughter while reading this! Your character is soooo cool! And the way you made Soul jealous was soo awesome!
2/25/2012 c2
9xXRoyal Mai and Miki HimeXx
Mai: awwwww so sweet
Miki: totally and finally black star cares for another person
Mai: i know right X3
Mai and MIki: arigatou Ganbatte ne JA NE! X3

Mai: awwwww so sweet
Miki: totally and finally black star cares for another person
Mai: i know right X3
Mai and MIki: arigatou Ganbatte ne JA NE! X3
2/21/2012 c1 xXRoyal Mai and Miki HimeXx
Mai: yay a soul eater fic! X3
Miki: I love this even if it has Yaoi in it but it seems interesting
Mai: yeah we were thinking of doing a soul eater fanfic like two new students that are twins their both weapons and meisters but...
Miki: it kinda seems like we are stealing your idea of both being weapons and meisters but anyway
Mai an Miki: Ganbatte ne JA NE! X3
Mai: can't wait for the yaoi part
Miki: I can't believe you mr imoto =.=
Mai: X3
Mai: yay a soul eater fic! X3
Miki: I love this even if it has Yaoi in it but it seems interesting
Mai: yeah we were thinking of doing a soul eater fanfic like two new students that are twins their both weapons and meisters but...
Miki: it kinda seems like we are stealing your idea of both being weapons and meisters but anyway
Mai an Miki: Ganbatte ne JA NE! X3
Mai: can't wait for the yaoi part
Miki: I can't believe you mr imoto =.=
Mai: X3
2/21/2012 c1
39Keys Studio
A little too much dialogue, dude. I'll help you Wednesday when we go back to school. I'll help you out on describing and whatnot. :3 Other than that, I like it. :D

A little too much dialogue, dude. I'll help you Wednesday when we go back to school. I'll help you out on describing and whatnot. :3 Other than that, I like it. :D