for Bleach: The Raven Angel8/17/2012 c25 
2HollowTailedSaiyan93
Dear Readers,
I do not know how many of you will see this before I update the next time, but here goes. I am so very sorry for the delay. 26 is in the works right now, but I've been preoccupied lately. I'm just about to move back in for my next semester in college, and the last couple of weeks have been a nightmare. Hopefully I can finish and upload this weekend. If not, I apologize in advance.
-HTS93 :)
2HollowTailedSaiyan93Dear Readers,
I do not know how many of you will see this before I update the next time, but here goes. I am so very sorry for the delay. 26 is in the works right now, but I've been preoccupied lately. I'm just about to move back in for my next semester in college, and the last couple of weeks have been a nightmare. Hopefully I can finish and upload this weekend. If not, I apologize in advance.
-HTS93 :)
8/8/2012 c1 Bagaudas
I'm here to review basically every chapter because I couldn't be damned reviewing each one individually.
Fantastic story! I actually love it! The characters are IC, the lemons are fantastic and the pacing/plot is excellent. I'm really glad you wrote this story. I will follow this story until it ends, no doubt about it!
I'm here to review basically every chapter because I couldn't be damned reviewing each one individually.
Fantastic story! I actually love it! The characters are IC, the lemons are fantastic and the pacing/plot is excellent. I'm really glad you wrote this story. I will follow this story until it ends, no doubt about it!
7/20/2012 c23 Guest
good chapter
good chapter
7/18/2012 c22 Guest
good chapter
good chapter
7/19/2012 c23 quietreaper
so the fun begins i like this infiltration plan better than canon much cleaner lol cant wait to see the action start :D
so the fun begins i like this infiltration plan better than canon much cleaner lol cant wait to see the action start :D
7/17/2012 c22 4adamxero
Nice, loved Hirako's moment and the lemon of course I'd like to see a jealous Renji when he sees Ichigo and Rukia together.
4adamxeroNice, loved Hirako's moment and the lemon of course I'd like to see a jealous Renji when he sees Ichigo and Rukia together.
7/17/2012 c22 Harveyman
A pleasant surprise to see the alert for this in my inbox. Be careful with the frequency of you *ahem* intimate scenes, too many and you start to replace love with lust. I'm glad we're going to see some action soon as I like seeing how authors handle it (everyone is different.) I hope you don't stick to the plot of the cannon SS arc too much (ie: order of fights, who fights who, etc- I know that the motivations and everything will be different.)
A pleasant surprise to see the alert for this in my inbox. Be careful with the frequency of you *ahem* intimate scenes, too many and you start to replace love with lust. I'm glad we're going to see some action soon as I like seeing how authors handle it (everyone is different.) I hope you don't stick to the plot of the cannon SS arc too much (ie: order of fights, who fights who, etc- I know that the motivations and everything will be different.)
7/13/2012 c21 2HollowTailedSaiyan93
I forgot to mention: The poll is posted on my profile page. Sorry about that. :)
2HollowTailedSaiyan93I forgot to mention: The poll is posted on my profile page. Sorry about that. :)
7/13/2012 c21 quietreaper
awesome chapter there little confession was heart felt but the fight was meaningful fear is never something you want in a fight it always hinders you...i learned the hard way. kisuke should have known better than to get him to learn the name of his signature attack i mean its gonna be OP lol rukia is a charm to ichigo she makes him stronger by just being near each other. cant wait to see the next chapter :D
awesome chapter there little confession was heart felt but the fight was meaningful fear is never something you want in a fight it always hinders you...i learned the hard way. kisuke should have known better than to get him to learn the name of his signature attack i mean its gonna be OP lol rukia is a charm to ichigo she makes him stronger by just being near each other. cant wait to see the next chapter :D
7/13/2012 c21 Aletheya
I think you should keep up this style. It really suits the story and gives it a feel of its own, rather than having it as a near copy of canon material. You promised this would be a great chapter, and you delivered. I commend you!
If you want to start another fic, that's your call, of course. But I don't think that's wise. Can you concentrate on two fics at the same time and still maintain the same level of quality in your writing? Besides, you don't update this one that frequently and I fear you'd be even less able to update it. But go ahead! I'll see your poll and vote and I'll probably read both your fics still. Just promise me you won't put this one on hold because of the other fic!
I think you should keep up this style. It really suits the story and gives it a feel of its own, rather than having it as a near copy of canon material. You promised this would be a great chapter, and you delivered. I commend you!
If you want to start another fic, that's your call, of course. But I don't think that's wise. Can you concentrate on two fics at the same time and still maintain the same level of quality in your writing? Besides, you don't update this one that frequently and I fear you'd be even less able to update it. But go ahead! I'll see your poll and vote and I'll probably read both your fics still. Just promise me you won't put this one on hold because of the other fic!