for Bleach: The Raven Angel7/8/2012 c20 
1DeathBeNoMore
GREAT! MORE PLEASE! THE STORY IS AWESOME AND THE LEMONS AND LEMONY GOODNESS!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
1DeathBeNoMoreGREAT! MORE PLEASE! THE STORY IS AWESOME AND THE LEMONS AND LEMONY GOODNESS!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
7/7/2012 c20 quietreaper
lol the Hogyoku was inside ichigo and now rukia what a twist the hollow is acting up i wonder how well ichigo can control him while he trains. cant wait to se rukia's reaction to learning that aizen is the mastermind behind everything. cant wait to see the next chapter :D
lol the Hogyoku was inside ichigo and now rukia what a twist the hollow is acting up i wonder how well ichigo can control him while he trains. cant wait to se rukia's reaction to learning that aizen is the mastermind behind everything. cant wait to see the next chapter :D
6/29/2012 c19 Harveyman
Another excellent chapter. A small suggestion: I had a little trouble figuring out who was saying what a few times during Rukia's conversation with Shirayuki. I would recommend changing Shirayuki's dialogue so that it was perhaps in italics to differentiate it. I would also recommend holding Ichigo hollow side's dialogue when he has taken over. Looking forward to your next update.
And to the admins: knock it off with the crusade against M rated stuff, you're just alienating the community.
And to the people supporting above crusade: dont like DON'T READ! (Sorry, just wanted to get that off my chest.)
Another excellent chapter. A small suggestion: I had a little trouble figuring out who was saying what a few times during Rukia's conversation with Shirayuki. I would recommend changing Shirayuki's dialogue so that it was perhaps in italics to differentiate it. I would also recommend holding Ichigo hollow side's dialogue when he has taken over. Looking forward to your next update.
And to the admins: knock it off with the crusade against M rated stuff, you're just alienating the community.
And to the people supporting above crusade: dont like DON'T READ! (Sorry, just wanted to get that off my chest.)
6/16/2012 c18 quietreaper
ooo the rumors are flying through soul society about rukia and ichigo, and Shunsui and Jushiro are worries something is gonna happen soon(if only they knew). and now aizen takes Barragan out of the way. cant wait for the next chapter :D
ooo the rumors are flying through soul society about rukia and ichigo, and Shunsui and Jushiro are worries something is gonna happen soon(if only they knew). and now aizen takes Barragan out of the way. cant wait for the next chapter :D
6/9/2012 c17 Harveyman
A good chapter as always. Can't really think of anything particular to point out but if I do I'll pm you. Looking forward to the next chapter.
A good chapter as always. Can't really think of anything particular to point out but if I do I'll pm you. Looking forward to the next chapter.
6/8/2012 c17 quietreaper
awesome chapter i loved it gotta love the ichi/ruki momments and that was one hell of a momment and all the detail you put into ichigo's feelings was perfect. i cant wait to see the next chapter :D
awesome chapter i loved it gotta love the ichi/ruki momments and that was one hell of a momment and all the detail you put into ichigo's feelings was perfect. i cant wait to see the next chapter :D
6/3/2012 c16 7Ink And Blade
Nice story, especially for a first. Has some errors here and there, but nicely written and definitely not a plot you see every day. You've earned yourself a fan.
-Light's Fiery Dragon
7Ink And BladeNice story, especially for a first. Has some errors here and there, but nicely written and definitely not a plot you see every day. You've earned yourself a fan.
-Light's Fiery Dragon
6/2/2012 c16 Aletheya
This has been a great story so far! I liked the training session, and I can't blame you for keeping things close to canon, but you could have exploited even more the fact that Rukia was there. Why not having Urahara attack her just to provoke a sudden burst of power from Ichigo? He's not above doing things like that. Oh, are you having Rukia training him in kido and the like, before the go to Soul Society to warn the Captains?
This has been a great story so far! I liked the training session, and I can't blame you for keeping things close to canon, but you could have exploited even more the fact that Rukia was there. Why not having Urahara attack her just to provoke a sudden burst of power from Ichigo? He's not above doing things like that. Oh, are you having Rukia training him in kido and the like, before the go to Soul Society to warn the Captains?
6/1/2012 c16 quietreaper
ah i remember stage 3 when i read/watched it i like the idea of rukia watching and worrying gives a more suspencefull outlook on the whole thing lol. poor bucket hat always takes the brunt of everything lol awesome chapter i cant wait for the next one :D
ah i remember stage 3 when i read/watched it i like the idea of rukia watching and worrying gives a more suspencefull outlook on the whole thing lol. poor bucket hat always takes the brunt of everything lol awesome chapter i cant wait for the next one :D
6/1/2012 c16 4adamxero
Great chapter are you going to have Ichigo learn Bankai the with Yourichi or are you going to have Uruhara teach him it? since the situation is different.
4adamxeroGreat chapter are you going to have Ichigo learn Bankai the with Yourichi or are you going to have Uruhara teach him it? since the situation is different.
5/18/2012 c15 quietreaper
woo this was an intense chapter ichigo almost lost it but rukia always saves him she does have one hell of a voice lol i liked how you had the hollows hand try to keep the sword in the box i cant wait to see the next chapter :D
woo this was an intense chapter ichigo almost lost it but rukia always saves him she does have one hell of a voice lol i liked how you had the hollows hand try to keep the sword in the box i cant wait to see the next chapter :D
5/18/2012 c15 4Culebra del Sol
That was a nice little scare from Ichigo's hollow. It's pretty original.
4Culebra del SolThat was a nice little scare from Ichigo's hollow. It's pretty original.