
4/8/2021 c41 Scarease
Reading this make think of Ocs that become Hell chosen Warden .His Job is quit simple judge souls hell ,insure get punishment they deserve ,should seek redemption and feel guilt for actions grant mean for do so ,reap particular evil souls be it form living world ,Hoco Mendo or other ,I watch over parole souls seek to reduce time In hell and keep track would escaped sinners .
Like he let happen to test Ichigo ,plus also to root hope of escape hi and his Wardens for none escape Eyes of Hell .Plus see his future wife Yuzu .All souls have sins depend if feel guilt actions ,the severity of sins reflect how long they stay and how deep they go .the deeper the long stay and more harsh the punishment .
Ichigo breaking into Hell may trigger Hell to Wake up so it wake up its chosen to enact its will
Reading this make think of Ocs that become Hell chosen Warden .His Job is quit simple judge souls hell ,insure get punishment they deserve ,should seek redemption and feel guilt for actions grant mean for do so ,reap particular evil souls be it form living world ,Hoco Mendo or other ,I watch over parole souls seek to reduce time In hell and keep track would escaped sinners .
Like he let happen to test Ichigo ,plus also to root hope of escape hi and his Wardens for none escape Eyes of Hell .Plus see his future wife Yuzu .All souls have sins depend if feel guilt actions ,the severity of sins reflect how long they stay and how deep they go .the deeper the long stay and more harsh the punishment .
Ichigo breaking into Hell may trigger Hell to Wake up so it wake up its chosen to enact its will
3/28/2021 c40 Sishen123
Loving the story so far but i wonder what ichigo will do to kisuke urahara when he finds out kisuke lied to him about his hollow powers origin because it sounded like isshin was going to come clean about everything including his shiba ancestry and kurosaki quincy lineage. Which would lead to ichigo finding out about his inner hollow being with him sense birth through his mom. But kisuke lied to ichigo and told him, his hollow powers were born from the hogyoku so I'm curious what ichigo would do. That's all for now peace out :)
Loving the story so far but i wonder what ichigo will do to kisuke urahara when he finds out kisuke lied to him about his hollow powers origin because it sounded like isshin was going to come clean about everything including his shiba ancestry and kurosaki quincy lineage. Which would lead to ichigo finding out about his inner hollow being with him sense birth through his mom. But kisuke lied to ichigo and told him, his hollow powers were born from the hogyoku so I'm curious what ichigo would do. That's all for now peace out :)
3/22/2021 c37 Scarease
Killing countless innocents for expirements ,place corrupt laws that lead more dead ,plan to commit genicide I tire town for own power rise perfect sign of corrupt megalomaniac,and framing other for you crimes .
You could used hypnosis to improve soul Society ,insured moral and just laws to better meant of After life instead you did what you did without ounce of shame or guilt for good souls you cuase suffer to .
You unfit to rule anyone .
Killing countless innocents for expirements ,place corrupt laws that lead more dead ,plan to commit genicide I tire town for own power rise perfect sign of corrupt megalomaniac,and framing other for you crimes .
You could used hypnosis to improve soul Society ,insured moral and just laws to better meant of After life instead you did what you did without ounce of shame or guilt for good souls you cuase suffer to .
You unfit to rule anyone .
3/22/2021 c38 achalida
I’m really surprised! Welcome back! Looking forward to read your next chapter, thank you for coming back.
I’m really surprised! Welcome back! Looking forward to read your next chapter, thank you for coming back.
3/21/2021 c38
2Inuyoukai52
Holy shit! Can’t say I expected to see this updated! Definitely not gonna complain though, it was really good, so I’ll be looking forward to more!

Holy shit! Can’t say I expected to see this updated! Definitely not gonna complain though, it was really good, so I’ll be looking forward to more!
3/21/2021 c1
1MyBoiCyndaquil
can't wait to see you back in action with this fiction again. I remember finding this one when I was still in highschool and loving it. one of the few unfinished fanfictions I ever kept coming back to

can't wait to see you back in action with this fiction again. I remember finding this one when I was still in highschool and loving it. one of the few unfinished fanfictions I ever kept coming back to
3/21/2021 c38 codywhite162
I am glad to see you back and no matter what I will love the new chapters you post from this story! In my opinion the wait will be definitely worth it!
I am glad to see you back and no matter what I will love the new chapters you post from this story! In my opinion the wait will be definitely worth it!
2/5/2020 c37 fandomgirl2012
Love love love! Hopefully you're still interested in this story and update? Would love to read more
Love love love! Hopefully you're still interested in this story and update? Would love to read more
1/25/2018 c5 Litany of Hate
Where the hell is your character development? We're seeing a reciprocal thoughts of affection in Chapters 1 and 2, then we move directly into awkward interactions and direct admission of love by Chapter 5 with very little in the way of events precipitating them. There's no tension at all.
This is wish-fulfillment at it's absolute worst. You've dropped IchiRuki into our laps without any effort and didn't even bother to gift wrap it. What this means is that your characters are completely OoC and I never even had a chance to get immersed because of your hamfisted approach. Their starting a relationship has zero impact on me because I'm not invested at all. You haven't made me invested at all, you just handed it over.
If you want an IchiRuki fic, you need to work at it. Even if they are legitimately admitting romantic affection for the other to themselves, they are both incredibly headstrong and stubborn individuals who bicker all the time. You've completely removed this trait from their dynamic without cause and replaced it by them make googly eyes at one another. This is not compelling writing.
Do I even care how Rukia got her powers back? Your characters don't. They're more interested in kissing, because reasons, I guess...
Read a book.
Where the hell is your character development? We're seeing a reciprocal thoughts of affection in Chapters 1 and 2, then we move directly into awkward interactions and direct admission of love by Chapter 5 with very little in the way of events precipitating them. There's no tension at all.
This is wish-fulfillment at it's absolute worst. You've dropped IchiRuki into our laps without any effort and didn't even bother to gift wrap it. What this means is that your characters are completely OoC and I never even had a chance to get immersed because of your hamfisted approach. Their starting a relationship has zero impact on me because I'm not invested at all. You haven't made me invested at all, you just handed it over.
If you want an IchiRuki fic, you need to work at it. Even if they are legitimately admitting romantic affection for the other to themselves, they are both incredibly headstrong and stubborn individuals who bicker all the time. You've completely removed this trait from their dynamic without cause and replaced it by them make googly eyes at one another. This is not compelling writing.
Do I even care how Rukia got her powers back? Your characters don't. They're more interested in kissing, because reasons, I guess...
Read a book.
11/21/2017 c1
2greasy snivellus
this gave me an idea. what if zangetsu and sode went and tried to match their reapers together XD

this gave me an idea. what if zangetsu and sode went and tried to match their reapers together XD
10/1/2017 c25 carroll.jerry25
most of these stories are the same shit how bout an ichigo that can seal is blade or use kido put some effort into your story seriously everyone exception of a few are all the same old ichigo gaining is power quicker or just inserting someone in where he trains to gain all the power he gains and put chapters in between for the fluff and romance and the jumps right back in you changed up the conan some yes so why don't you or the others also had some twist to the characters power development to it's sad the story is good really it's just personally wish that it can be mixed up some more with characters ability wise
most of these stories are the same shit how bout an ichigo that can seal is blade or use kido put some effort into your story seriously everyone exception of a few are all the same old ichigo gaining is power quicker or just inserting someone in where he trains to gain all the power he gains and put chapters in between for the fluff and romance and the jumps right back in you changed up the conan some yes so why don't you or the others also had some twist to the characters power development to it's sad the story is good really it's just personally wish that it can be mixed up some more with characters ability wise
8/21/2016 c37 SetoRJK-Kaiba
Now this is a good bleach story, I love it especially the ichiruki romance. Please continue the story because this the best one I have read in a while. Great work
Now this is a good bleach story, I love it especially the ichiruki romance. Please continue the story because this the best one I have read in a while. Great work
6/7/2016 c37
4Vi-Violence
Awesome! This is a really great fic! I'll be looking forward to your next update!

Awesome! This is a really great fic! I'll be looking forward to your next update!