for I am Proud of My Brother, the King7/15/2012 c1 
12captindonavin
I amnot a book only person but i do prefer them. and it really botherd me with the whole Susan caspian thing. and so i'm glad to hear that at least one person came up with a way that the prince didn't have to bein that particular sean. and iliked how you had their relationship, right from the begining. though i want to ask, is she an older or a younger?
Donnie
12captindonavinI amnot a book only person but i do prefer them. and it really botherd me with the whole Susan caspian thing. and so i'm glad to hear that at least one person came up with a way that the prince didn't have to bein that particular sean. and iliked how you had their relationship, right from the begining. though i want to ask, is she an older or a younger?
Donnie
2/20/2012 c1 236LadyAlambiel
This is great! I liked how you blended your OC with the movie canon. The portrayal of Cala and Caspian's relationship is wonderful. I would be thrilled to see the entire story one day. I liked how you made Cala an experienced healer so it wasn't just Edmund using his basic field medical training on his brother (the healers just love it when soldiers perform medical procedures on each other :P). One question is Cala older than Caspian? Her opening rant certainly sounds like something the older sibling would say to the younger.
As always keep writing!
Lady A
236LadyAlambielThis is great! I liked how you blended your OC with the movie canon. The portrayal of Cala and Caspian's relationship is wonderful. I would be thrilled to see the entire story one day. I liked how you made Cala an experienced healer so it wasn't just Edmund using his basic field medical training on his brother (the healers just love it when soldiers perform medical procedures on each other :P). One question is Cala older than Caspian? Her opening rant certainly sounds like something the older sibling would say to the younger.
As always keep writing!
Lady A