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3/2/2012 c1 6Sincere Disappearance
N'aww, I really liked this story. The moment you mentioned that he was in the prison, I could picture everything you described and you did it really well. I liked the fact that you had it towards the end of the game, instead of near the start. I'm not sure why, but putting it there actually seemed kind of fitting.

Putting the monsters in was good too because that way, you could lengthen the story despite it being short. I think it ended perfectly too.

If you write any more amnesia fics, I'd be happy to read them.
2/25/2012 c1 rachael
That wax a gd story I love it
2/22/2012 c1 Xd465
Really nice detail when to start it off. The short story was ended just right. A resolve sort of thing. I'm GOING to find my memory. Not exactly worded like that but good resolve. Let's see...,the finding a new pathway bit was also good. I'm too good at constructive criticism but, it got me reading those paragraphs. If I'm reading it all, it's good. Great job. Sometimes short stories aren't bad at all. Especially when they're done right.

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