for a lonely windy night5/29/2012 c1 Ed2222
It was good... But dude the grammar... It was awful
It was good... But dude the grammar... It was awful
5/26/2012 c1 Yvonne
The story itself was great but the grammar could have been better n would have made it easier to understand but overall it was very good
The story itself was great but the grammar could have been better n would have made it easier to understand but overall it was very good
2/24/2012 c1 chocolate strawberry
this was an exciting story needs to be a little more limony but other then that good you shod make a sequal
this was an exciting story needs to be a little more limony but other then that good you shod make a sequal
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