for Believe in Me2/17/2018 c1 Guest
This was little unique one I certainly don't see red anywhere in shipping stories. nice little twist you added onto Red as well
This was little unique one I certainly don't see red anywhere in shipping stories. nice little twist you added onto Red as well
10/26/2013 c1 sonicgx8344
That was very good I enjoy it.
That was very good I enjoy it.
12/31/2012 c1 Skye Izumi
Now that was totally unepected, but for ssome reason it works.
Making Red a CPU, but it gives an explaination for her search, her past. Even if it is a fan explaination, it works.
Secondly I really laughed when the DBZ refereneces came up.
Now that was totally unepected, but for ssome reason it works.
Making Red a CPU, but it gives an explaination for her search, her past. Even if it is a fan explaination, it works.
Secondly I really laughed when the DBZ refereneces came up.
4/25/2012 c1 
14Perfect Beauty
This story is very interesting. You did a good job being detailed. I liked it.
14Perfect BeautyThis story is very interesting. You did a good job being detailed. I liked it.
4/25/2012 c1 36Whiitewolf
This was a great read. I already really like the character IF.
It was sweet, and I felt a connection with the story, despite it not being very long.
I also enjoyed the fight scene. It's not often you find one well done. They normally end up awkward. But yours was great.
A fantastic read, and I definitely enjoyed it. :)
36WhiitewolfThis was a great read. I already really like the character IF.
It was sweet, and I felt a connection with the story, despite it not being very long.
I also enjoyed the fight scene. It's not often you find one well done. They normally end up awkward. But yours was great.
A fantastic read, and I definitely enjoyed it. :)
4/20/2012 c1 14ChibiSoulReader
Aww *tear* that was so sweet. The more of these stories I read the more I fall in love with the characters. Awesome fight scene by the way, I like it's descriptions. I hope you write more like this~
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14ChibiSoulReaderAww *tear* that was so sweet. The more of these stories I read the more I fall in love with the characters. Awesome fight scene by the way, I like it's descriptions. I hope you write more like this~
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4/19/2012 c1 Jhu0ii
^_^ ..Aw, EeeOo0h.
How sweet ;)
Is this just a game or is there a series of this?
...I just googled for images of these two.
They look SO young.
You did awesomenessfully with this thaaang..
xD
I like!
^_^ ..Aw, EeeOo0h.
How sweet ;)
Is this just a game or is there a series of this?
...I just googled for images of these two.
They look SO young.
You did awesomenessfully with this thaaang..
xD
I like!
4/19/2012 c1 Dzuljeta
This was an interesting story... although the fandom means nothing to me, I liked the way you described things ;)
This was an interesting story... although the fandom means nothing to me, I liked the way you described things ;)
4/18/2012 c1 91Akela Victoire
Not bad at all! No grammar/spelling errors that I can see, it ran smoothly... Great work!
91Akela VictoireNot bad at all! No grammar/spelling errors that I can see, it ran smoothly... Great work!
4/1/2012 c1 1Nue7
You're so much better than me!
Anyways, Is this based off Rednal's comics on the NIS America forums?
1Nue7You're so much better than me!
Anyways, Is this based off Rednal's comics on the NIS America forums?
3/4/2012 c1 Psycho-Pass
Wouldn't it be great if this was put in the sequel but sadly it won't come to be.
Good job at keeping IF's somewhat hesitance to RED's wifey calling.
But I wish she accepted for real instead out of humor in the game.
Wouldn't it be great if this was put in the sequel but sadly it won't come to be.
Good job at keeping IF's somewhat hesitance to RED's wifey calling.
But I wish she accepted for real instead out of humor in the game.
2/25/2012 c1 Solias
If only it was like this in the original.
Red and IF are my favorite couple.
If only it was like this in the original.
Red and IF are my favorite couple.
2/22/2012 c1 Kuroiame7
This was a great story. This is my favorite pairing that invoves IF. You did a great job.
This was a great story. This is my favorite pairing that invoves IF. You did a great job.