12/14/2019 c11 3XxCrimsonShadowxX
THAT WAS SO DAMN GOOD and the ending was such a tear jerker I DEMAND you come back to this awesome series before I get the chainsaw!
THAT WAS SO DAMN GOOD and the ending was such a tear jerker I DEMAND you come back to this awesome series before I get the chainsaw!
4/27/2016 c10 Guest
Cant wait! Your story is amazing!
Cant wait! Your story is amazing!
12/12/2015 c10 4AliceStar
Outside of the interesting plot, your writing is so fluid and very well written. I remember reading this awhile ago and enjoying it! Definitely look forward to seeing more! :)
Outside of the interesting plot, your writing is so fluid and very well written. I remember reading this awhile ago and enjoying it! Definitely look forward to seeing more! :)
9/14/2015 c9 Akuru
Not many good stories like these with such flavor and charm! You should definitely continue writing this! I'd like to see an adventure where Luigi has to rescue Daisy :) that'd be awesome!
Not many good stories like these with such flavor and charm! You should definitely continue writing this! I'd like to see an adventure where Luigi has to rescue Daisy :) that'd be awesome!
9/26/2014 c9 Guest
Please upload a new chapter.. Pwitty pwease?
Please upload a new chapter.. Pwitty pwease?
7/18/2013 c1 10iSqueakers
Haha! Woo, during my teenaged years, I sure felt the same way Daisy did. "It won't happen again, she told herself." Reminds me of the days when I always stayed up until atleast midnight texting back when flip phones and Razrs were awesome. Texting privledged people who could afford a $200-300 "awesome" phone with texting, that is.
But anyway, I love the idea of the fanfiction so far, it being based off of school (and the setting isn't JUST school, which is another bonus). King Sarasaland does NOT seem to be the type of royalty that I want to mess around with; he has a tomboy daughter after all!
Anyway, I will read more of this and I will review further. See ya!
Haha! Woo, during my teenaged years, I sure felt the same way Daisy did. "It won't happen again, she told herself." Reminds me of the days when I always stayed up until atleast midnight texting back when flip phones and Razrs were awesome. Texting privledged people who could afford a $200-300 "awesome" phone with texting, that is.
But anyway, I love the idea of the fanfiction so far, it being based off of school (and the setting isn't JUST school, which is another bonus). King Sarasaland does NOT seem to be the type of royalty that I want to mess around with; he has a tomboy daughter after all!
Anyway, I will read more of this and I will review further. See ya!
6/9/2013 c9 Guest
Update already I want more
Update already I want more
6/7/2013 c9 bluekoopa
Ah I love this can't wait to see more of rose
Ah I love this can't wait to see more of rose
6/7/2013 c8 daisylover
I have a ocean named princess of the kingdom of bobbin she's blonde with green eyes and she's shy but once you get her to talk she won't shut up I'd be honored if you wrote her in
I have a ocean named princess of the kingdom of bobbin she's blonde with green eyes and she's shy but once you get her to talk she won't shut up I'd be honored if you wrote her in
6/7/2013 c9 5rene10
Aw, this was a great chapter! I wonder what's up with Rose's mom though... Can't wait for the next part!
Aw, this was a great chapter! I wonder what's up with Rose's mom though... Can't wait for the next part!
6/6/2013 c9 James Birdsong
Excellent stories
Excellent stories
6/5/2013 c9 Guest
I hate rose why do you have to make her shes so mean
I hate rose why do you have to make her shes so mean
6/5/2013 c1 ElizabethBetty
Awesome!More,more,more!
Awesome!More,more,more!
3/23/2013 c8 deletedacct39592
Haha, tis me Inspired Girl. So sorry I have not reviewed in a long time. I have not been in this particular section much...I'm more into Hunger Games now.
Liked my OC. She was great. The only other thing is that she is a professional singer, I believe, and sings for royalty. Did I mention that in my original review? Not sure if I did...
-FFWS (once Inspired Girl)
Haha, tis me Inspired Girl. So sorry I have not reviewed in a long time. I have not been in this particular section much...I'm more into Hunger Games now.
Liked my OC. She was great. The only other thing is that she is a professional singer, I believe, and sings for royalty. Did I mention that in my original review? Not sure if I did...
-FFWS (once Inspired Girl)