for The Kirk Factor5/25/2017 c2 Guest
Update soon?
Update soon?
3/27/2014 c2 
4MidnightPenguin
It is really good so far, but I feel like Tayla is a bit too perfect. Best at everything and what not. I foresee Jim or someone knocking her down a couple pegs. Look foreword to your next posts!
4MidnightPenguinIt is really good so far, but I feel like Tayla is a bit too perfect. Best at everything and what not. I foresee Jim or someone knocking her down a couple pegs. Look foreword to your next posts!
2/8/2014 c1 Dominique
That was really good! I liked her attitude..xD
That was really good! I liked her attitude..xD
2/24/2012 c1 7Saavikam69
i liked and enjoyed your story. be careful of typos and run-on sentences. will there be a second chapter?
7Saavikam69i liked and enjoyed your story. be careful of typos and run-on sentences. will there be a second chapter?