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6/28/2012 c1 23TheHuntersMoon
HAHAHAHA lol ORANGE! That was wicked hehe! It had to be Fred didn't it? Well either Fred or George but I figured it was him... Dunno before I read the bit where it kinda said it were him but yeh anyways that was wicked ;) x

Destrier :D x
5/3/2012 c1 Todd Potter
Work on your diction to achieve a stronger style. work on varying your sentence structure and also not making shitty stories thanks
3/19/2012 c1 21Miss-RKO
Hey these has been such an enjoyable read sis :D

u did a great job and its really really adorable :D

Awwww Fred and Gillian are sooo cuteee :D ♥

Love it sis :d Great Job xD ♥
3/14/2012 c1 5the one with a divine smile
aww.. it was really cute.. though i think there is a mistake...if gillian is fifteen and in the twins' year it shouldn't be umbridge as she came in their seventh year... but the story is really cute.. i loved it! :D 3

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