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7/4/2012 c1 Guest
Adorable! Hehe great work!
4/19/2012 c1 Paiwan
Hi :)

It's really clever! and very funny :D very well written and catchy. I really got into it, which makes the ending that much better! It's great!
4/5/2012 c1 h50rookie
Adorable and funny!
3/23/2012 c1 Shani8
LOL! This was too cute! Loved it, and well done!

~Shani :)
3/4/2012 c1 36francis2
3/2/2012 c1 2Malia Amane
Haha! Did not see that coming at all! V. Funny!
2/25/2012 c1 17lovepride
too funny.

Let me know about other stories you're writing.
2/25/2012 c1 bushy4
Very cute story!
2/24/2012 c1 aprilrunrunrun
bahahahahahaha! definitely wasn't expecting that. cute. you have a clear writing style that i really like. hope you write a longer fiction with some real five-0 drama and action. great job!
2/24/2012 c1 sphekie
I thought kono/Steve was getting ready to bust up the bad guy, didn't know it was a mice. Hahaha! Good twist! U have make me a fool, lol! Great story! I have a good laugh..thank for the great story ;)
2/24/2012 c1 Courtney
That was brilliant(:
2/24/2012 c1 Susan
This was really cute! I literally laughed out loud at the end. Very creative too, you had me fooled. ;) Great job!

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