for The Autumn Swan11/7/2020 c8 
1momentofeclipse
This is one of my favourite fanfics and I can't wait to see what's next!
1momentofeclipseThis is one of my favourite fanfics and I can't wait to see what's next!
11/5/2020 c11 ankvasker
So I just re-read this story and I had forgotten how good it was. I hope you find the time and motivation to update it soon. Since the updates are so rare I was considering re-reading the original, but after a few chapters I was struck by how much better this version is.
If you are having struggles with writing I can recommend setting a very small goal like writing one paragraph everyday (or even a sentence if a paragraph is too much). That way you will always be moving the story forward even if it is slow, and some days you wil probably get a burst of creativity or motivation and simply continue writing.
Either way, I'm not trying to tell you how to do things, you don't need to follow my advice. I really do hope that you continue writing this amazing story though, but I understand that life can get in the way.
I hope you are doing well regardless of what happens with the story!
Ankvasker
So I just re-read this story and I had forgotten how good it was. I hope you find the time and motivation to update it soon. Since the updates are so rare I was considering re-reading the original, but after a few chapters I was struck by how much better this version is.
If you are having struggles with writing I can recommend setting a very small goal like writing one paragraph everyday (or even a sentence if a paragraph is too much). That way you will always be moving the story forward even if it is slow, and some days you wil probably get a burst of creativity or motivation and simply continue writing.
Either way, I'm not trying to tell you how to do things, you don't need to follow my advice. I really do hope that you continue writing this amazing story though, but I understand that life can get in the way.
I hope you are doing well regardless of what happens with the story!
Ankvasker
10/23/2020 c11 christjp05
Well written. True to cannon with subtle changes. Your cho has a better tone being less the girl who knows she is pretty and wanted and more the girl who hangs with the boys and doesn’t understand what they see in her. I hope you can get Harry to learn to open up to her, maybe not about everything, but a few aspects of his life. To show her his trust in her. Also, I hope you show more if the club umbridge will hold over cho with her moms ministry job and their opinion of Harry. Hope for more chapters soon.
Well written. True to cannon with subtle changes. Your cho has a better tone being less the girl who knows she is pretty and wanted and more the girl who hangs with the boys and doesn’t understand what they see in her. I hope you can get Harry to learn to open up to her, maybe not about everything, but a few aspects of his life. To show her his trust in her. Also, I hope you show more if the club umbridge will hold over cho with her moms ministry job and their opinion of Harry. Hope for more chapters soon.
9/29/2020 c11 3Almondz
Finally caught up! I hope things are going well for you, and if the time since is any indication, I hope that the pandemic hasn't affected you too hard. I do hope it isn't another four years until you update, but I will still be here regardless. Take care!
3AlmondzFinally caught up! I hope things are going well for you, and if the time since is any indication, I hope that the pandemic hasn't affected you too hard. I do hope it isn't another four years until you update, but I will still be here regardless. Take care!
7/29/2020 c11 Guest
Hi, I'm just wondering if you are continuing to write the next parts of this story. I really hope so because this has been one of the best things that I have read this year!
Hi, I'm just wondering if you are continuing to write the next parts of this story. I really hope so because this has been one of the best things that I have read this year!
6/5/2020 c11 Anonymous
Hi! I just want to say how much I enjoy your writing! I recently just found it and I have been in awe with every chapter I have read! I must commend you on how accurately you depicted all the characters in the book! Harry Potter/Cho Chang fanfiction is really hard to come by, especially an actually good one! I really hope you do not neglect this fanfiction, because I feel that it has so much potential and it has taken me on such an enjoyable ride thus far!
Hi! I just want to say how much I enjoy your writing! I recently just found it and I have been in awe with every chapter I have read! I must commend you on how accurately you depicted all the characters in the book! Harry Potter/Cho Chang fanfiction is really hard to come by, especially an actually good one! I really hope you do not neglect this fanfiction, because I feel that it has so much potential and it has taken me on such an enjoyable ride thus far!
4/14/2020 c11 250H.R.C. Stanley
Cool seeing something new again. I hope Tomorrowland Now gets the same revival treatment
250H.R.C. StanleyCool seeing something new again. I hope Tomorrowland Now gets the same revival treatment
3/3/2020 c1 25Lillian Smith
Holy cow! I've just read the prologue so far and this looks really promising! I'm impressed with the way you've characterized Cho so far. I absolutely love the bond she has with the team. And I love the fact that despite everything Cho has heard about Harry, the only thing she decided to do was to smile. I love the way you've written Harry's reaction! I have a feeling this is gonna be one of my favourites, and I rarely favourite stories.
25Lillian SmithHoly cow! I've just read the prologue so far and this looks really promising! I'm impressed with the way you've characterized Cho so far. I absolutely love the bond she has with the team. And I love the fact that despite everything Cho has heard about Harry, the only thing she decided to do was to smile. I love the way you've written Harry's reaction! I have a feeling this is gonna be one of my favourites, and I rarely favourite stories.
1/25/2020 c11 6Krionik
I'm not even really a big Harry Potter fan, but I'm definitely enjoying this so far! :)
6KrionikI'm not even really a big Harry Potter fan, but I'm definitely enjoying this so far! :)
1/6/2020 c11 CelinaGryffindor
hello. I'm in love with your fic. and I sincerely hope that it doesn't take you months or worse years to update again kkkk please don't make your reader suffer like this. i am and live in brazilian, and i recently visited london and warner HP studio, this greatly revived my desire to read fanfiction. I'm a fan of Cho / Harry, although I love Ginny with him too. but cho is the only one I really agree to read with Harry kkk anyway, despite years without updating, I realized that his writing doesn't change and the characters remain the same despite their growth in the plot itself (eg harry having more confidence talking to Cho). oh I hope for more romance too, and it would be nice to see Ginny try to win Harry over and see how this trio unfolds. I really wanted to understand Harry's behavior on the train, I think he still doesn't totally trust him or believe in their relationship, hopefully that will change. as a major reader of NC's, I will kindly ask you to think carefully about changing the rating to T or M hahahaha (sorry, but I need to try). now he is 15 and she is 16, Harry has to stop acting like the hormones are not in full combustion kkkkk congratulations on writing and please, it doesn't take years to update. miss fics as well as your main reading Cho / Harry .. kisses. ps: taking advantage of the fact that you quoted "cursed child", she doesn't represent me, I really don't recognize any of the characters and I think it is a slutty J.K gave the blessing for that. but I don't take credit for the products and actors of the play, it must be amazing to watch, but the story, I'm ashamed I got it.
hello. I'm in love with your fic. and I sincerely hope that it doesn't take you months or worse years to update again kkkk please don't make your reader suffer like this. i am and live in brazilian, and i recently visited london and warner HP studio, this greatly revived my desire to read fanfiction. I'm a fan of Cho / Harry, although I love Ginny with him too. but cho is the only one I really agree to read with Harry kkk anyway, despite years without updating, I realized that his writing doesn't change and the characters remain the same despite their growth in the plot itself (eg harry having more confidence talking to Cho). oh I hope for more romance too, and it would be nice to see Ginny try to win Harry over and see how this trio unfolds. I really wanted to understand Harry's behavior on the train, I think he still doesn't totally trust him or believe in their relationship, hopefully that will change. as a major reader of NC's, I will kindly ask you to think carefully about changing the rating to T or M hahahaha (sorry, but I need to try). now he is 15 and she is 16, Harry has to stop acting like the hormones are not in full combustion kkkkk congratulations on writing and please, it doesn't take years to update. miss fics as well as your main reading Cho / Harry .. kisses. ps: taking advantage of the fact that you quoted "cursed child", she doesn't represent me, I really don't recognize any of the characters and I think it is a slutty J.K gave the blessing for that. but I don't take credit for the products and actors of the play, it must be amazing to watch, but the story, I'm ashamed I got it.
12/22/2019 c11 2Aimless Gallifreyan
It has been far too long. Glad to see this back.
I will admit, I was interested in the backstory of Amelia Bones and the downfall of Crouch in the original. Nevertheless, hope to see this continue
2Aimless GallifreyanIt has been far too long. Glad to see this back.
I will admit, I was interested in the backstory of Amelia Bones and the downfall of Crouch in the original. Nevertheless, hope to see this continue
11/26/2019 c1 Daniel Yang
I think in the original story, Cho's parents are wizards, and they work in the Ministry of Magic.
I think in the original story, Cho's parents are wizards, and they work in the Ministry of Magic.