for The Autumn Swan12/19/2015 c10 Rip Ryu
This is a seriously great story. I hope you keep the updates up! Update faster or Crucio!
This is a seriously great story. I hope you keep the updates up! Update faster or Crucio!
12/17/2015 c3 WildKhaine
Well, your writing is good but the so far the chemistry between Cho and Harry is a bit meh. Harry is drooling over her, acting like an idiot and Cho seems to be fairly indifferent. Her answer was more saying yes not to be rude and being a nice person then any real desire to go with Harry, at least that was the way it came across to me. Harry seems to be excited, obviously since he can drool over her and go on in his head over what a vision she is, while Cho just seems to be there smiling vacantly wishing the night was over. I mean she doesn't need to come across as a Potter fangirl but even just a tiny bit of excitement about the whole thing would be nice. To me she is coming off a bit flat. She's just kind of there and that's it. Maybe it picks up but not really much interested in pursuing it after this. Anyway, good luck with your writing and story.
Well, your writing is good but the so far the chemistry between Cho and Harry is a bit meh. Harry is drooling over her, acting like an idiot and Cho seems to be fairly indifferent. Her answer was more saying yes not to be rude and being a nice person then any real desire to go with Harry, at least that was the way it came across to me. Harry seems to be excited, obviously since he can drool over her and go on in his head over what a vision she is, while Cho just seems to be there smiling vacantly wishing the night was over. I mean she doesn't need to come across as a Potter fangirl but even just a tiny bit of excitement about the whole thing would be nice. To me she is coming off a bit flat. She's just kind of there and that's it. Maybe it picks up but not really much interested in pursuing it after this. Anyway, good luck with your writing and story.
12/14/2015 c10 
15I no longer remember
Super glad to see that a new chapter is up for this story. I was hoping that it would be picked up again. Its understandable though that work had too come first. Provided there was an explanation why the story wasn't seeing progress, its fine with me that it took awhile to continue.
Hope you can update soon. Looking forward too more.
15I no longer rememberSuper glad to see that a new chapter is up for this story. I was hoping that it would be picked up again. Its understandable though that work had too come first. Provided there was an explanation why the story wasn't seeing progress, its fine with me that it took awhile to continue.
Hope you can update soon. Looking forward too more.
12/5/2015 c10 255H.R.C. Stanley
Just when I least expected it, you actually came back? (:
Good luck in the future...
255H.R.C. StanleyJust when I least expected it, you actually came back? (:
Good luck in the future...
11/28/2015 c10 5Tardy-Typewriter
You know what! You actually made me go and find my account JUST so I can review this. God knows how many times I have read your Harry/Cho FF. To be honest I was ecstatic to see you update. Cause god knows I wish this pairing got updated at all. I was also happy with the reboot. There were times in the old story, and don't get me wrong I loved some of the other plots, I was secretly just hoping we got back to the two. However I do hope they do have some clashes. Can't have them always happy and perfect, that's what made the couple so loveable in story, right before my hopes and dreams were crushed by J.K. I like the fluff but I want hatred and passion aswell :D. Also between you and I, I couldn't get over the Hedwig situation, it was kinda adorable with Sirius but I kinda felt that was a plot for an entirely different story. I don't know what else to say. You really did make my week with this update, and I really hope I don't have to wait another year for the next update, otherwise I might actually go grey.
5Tardy-TypewriterYou know what! You actually made me go and find my account JUST so I can review this. God knows how many times I have read your Harry/Cho FF. To be honest I was ecstatic to see you update. Cause god knows I wish this pairing got updated at all. I was also happy with the reboot. There were times in the old story, and don't get me wrong I loved some of the other plots, I was secretly just hoping we got back to the two. However I do hope they do have some clashes. Can't have them always happy and perfect, that's what made the couple so loveable in story, right before my hopes and dreams were crushed by J.K. I like the fluff but I want hatred and passion aswell :D. Also between you and I, I couldn't get over the Hedwig situation, it was kinda adorable with Sirius but I kinda felt that was a plot for an entirely different story. I don't know what else to say. You really did make my week with this update, and I really hope I don't have to wait another year for the next update, otherwise I might actually go grey.
11/27/2015 c10 guhgiog08e9rhiogoiheg98whgiogo
Great chapter! I'll be looking forward to reading more!
Great chapter! I'll be looking forward to reading more!
11/27/2015 c10 12Louatown
at last! I love that you mentioned the scottish-chinese mixture because I've watched an interview of Katie Leung and loads of people were pointing out how weird it was to watch a chinese with a scottish accent. I also love how you let us see how Cho's parents reacted to her dating the Harry Potter. It's something that never crosses my mind.
12Louatownat last! I love that you mentioned the scottish-chinese mixture because I've watched an interview of Katie Leung and loads of people were pointing out how weird it was to watch a chinese with a scottish accent. I also love how you let us see how Cho's parents reacted to her dating the Harry Potter. It's something that never crosses my mind.
11/27/2015 c10 3Nerilla
I love this chapter and the story overall, I always wished that Harry and Cho had more of a chance and that Harry interacted more with the other houses. One thing that I don't understand though: is Harry not having nightmares and survival's guilt after the graveyard with Voldy? I mean, I get that Cho is writing to him to talk about it and that he had a very cathartic moment with her last chapter, but, really, he doesn't seem at all affected. Moreover, is Cho a pureblood or half-blood, the story doesn't really make it that clear. Overall, however, I do love the story and hope you continue it.
3NerillaI love this chapter and the story overall, I always wished that Harry and Cho had more of a chance and that Harry interacted more with the other houses. One thing that I don't understand though: is Harry not having nightmares and survival's guilt after the graveyard with Voldy? I mean, I get that Cho is writing to him to talk about it and that he had a very cathartic moment with her last chapter, but, really, he doesn't seem at all affected. Moreover, is Cho a pureblood or half-blood, the story doesn't really make it that clear. Overall, however, I do love the story and hope you continue it.
11/26/2015 c10 shushanepa
Wow an update! Thanks for mentioning me. I am glad you have planned out the ending for this story. Moreover I really hope Hedwigbis still in the story.
Wow an update! Thanks for mentioning me. I am glad you have planned out the ending for this story. Moreover I really hope Hedwigbis still in the story.
7/12/2015 c9 Victor
Hello!
I've been a long time reader. Actually, I started reading from the beginning of Harry Potter and the Autumn Sawn. I've been reading your fanfic for a really really long time and I enjoy it. As you get ready for the next chapter I would like to see more activity between Harry and Cho with more confidence and their interactions with Ron and Hermione as well. I know that Harry starts to go crazy throughout the book but to see Cho be his rock would be good to see either way I leave it up to you can wait to keep reading whenever you get back!
Hello!
I've been a long time reader. Actually, I started reading from the beginning of Harry Potter and the Autumn Sawn. I've been reading your fanfic for a really really long time and I enjoy it. As you get ready for the next chapter I would like to see more activity between Harry and Cho with more confidence and their interactions with Ron and Hermione as well. I know that Harry starts to go crazy throughout the book but to see Cho be his rock would be good to see either way I leave it up to you can wait to keep reading whenever you get back!