for Lost and Loved3/14/2013 c1 Guest
hope
hope
10/6/2012 c1 minoria
THIS IS SICK!
AWESOME and CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPEN! WHAT DID KICK DO TO HER?
please submit the next chapter asap!
THIS IS SICK!
AWESOME and CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPEN! WHAT DID KICK DO TO HER?
please submit the next chapter asap!
8/20/2012 c1 youdontneedtokno
what happend
what happend
8/19/2012 c1 miki
KISS KISS KISS what about the kiss?
KISS KISS KISS what about the kiss?
8/19/2012 c1 Guest
CONTINUE IT!
CONTINUE IT!
8/15/2012 c1 harms
i luv it ! n what did kick do ? 0_o
i luv it ! n what did kick do ? 0_o
3/22/2012 c1 
4Hate Eater
What the biscuits!... don´t get anyhing here, i´m like... in the air =@.@= need to know what stupid thing say Kick... NEED TO KNOW!
4Hate EaterWhat the biscuits!... don´t get anyhing here, i´m like... in the air =@.@= need to know what stupid thing say Kick... NEED TO KNOW!
2/27/2012 c1 14Tall T
Well, in the next chapter you should focus on what exactly happened between the two of them. And maybe you could go back in history and tell us why Kendall changed as much as she apparently did.
14Tall TWell, in the next chapter you should focus on what exactly happened between the two of them. And maybe you could go back in history and tell us why Kendall changed as much as she apparently did.
2/25/2012 c1 7LittleMissPink96
The plot of the story is great, but one minute it's in the present tense and the next it's in the past. Make up your about which one you want to write in, and the story will flow much better.
It needs to be longer as well - people don't like short stories. Try to get at least 1,000 words in each chapter.
Other than that, the plot is great and it looks promising. Just take the advice above and it should improve the story a lot.
7LittleMissPink96The plot of the story is great, but one minute it's in the present tense and the next it's in the past. Make up your about which one you want to write in, and the story will flow much better.
It needs to be longer as well - people don't like short stories. Try to get at least 1,000 words in each chapter.
Other than that, the plot is great and it looks promising. Just take the advice above and it should improve the story a lot.
2/25/2012 c1 6notalivezombie
Its an interesting start, but the next few chapters is where ill lay down my real judgement.
6notalivezombieIts an interesting start, but the next few chapters is where ill lay down my real judgement.
2/25/2012 c1 AgentButtowski101
It was nice but what are they talking about actually? It can't be that Kick was kissing someone else or something. Please write more I'm beggin on my kness. Can we be friends? I xant tell you my real name but since my FF name us AgentButtowski101, you can call me Alex.
-Alex (that is not, my real name ok.)
It was nice but what are they talking about actually? It can't be that Kick was kissing someone else or something. Please write more I'm beggin on my kness. Can we be friends? I xant tell you my real name but since my FF name us AgentButtowski101, you can call me Alex.
-Alex (that is not, my real name ok.)