for The Proposal8/8/2014 c1 Guest
Fiancee means future WIFE. James isn't Lily's fiancee, but her FIANCE.
Fiancee means future WIFE. James isn't Lily's fiancee, but her FIANCE.
4/7/2012 c1 
3Narnia and Harry Potter 4 EVER
LOVE Siruis comment at the end the stroy is amazing as well but I LOVE Siruis comment is made my day :) BRIILLIENT STORY
3Narnia and Harry Potter 4 EVERLOVE Siruis comment at the end the stroy is amazing as well but I LOVE Siruis comment is made my day :) BRIILLIENT STORY
2/26/2012 c1 Hannah
I liked it!
I thought that the two of them were perfectly in character. As far as I am concerned we recieved a one chapter preview into their personalities when they were in highschool.
People change...alot!
I loved how you portrayed them!
Great job!
I liked it!
I thought that the two of them were perfectly in character. As far as I am concerned we recieved a one chapter preview into their personalities when they were in highschool.
People change...alot!
I loved how you portrayed them!
Great job!
2/25/2012 c1 xxTrixie
How cute! I liked it quite a bit.
It short and fluffy and enjoyable to read. Only, I think james and lily got married straight out of school.
How cute! I liked it quite a bit.
It short and fluffy and enjoyable to read. Only, I think james and lily got married straight out of school.
2/25/2012 c1 siriusrocks
Hmmm, it was nice. I just wish that you had expanded the end more. Haha, the thought of poor Sirius waiting outside. Keep writing, you write well.
Hmmm, it was nice. I just wish that you had expanded the end more. Haha, the thought of poor Sirius waiting outside. Keep writing, you write well.
2/25/2012 c1 xxTrixie
How cute! I liked it quite a bit.
It short and fluffy and enjoyable to read. Only, I think james and lily got married straight out of school.
How cute! I liked it quite a bit.
It short and fluffy and enjoyable to read. Only, I think james and lily got married straight out of school.
2/25/2012 c1 1FreakishlyMee
This is awesome! James is a bit mushy, but who doesnt love a mushy James? Anyway, the ending was genius. I LOVED it. Good luck with your exams, I have mine next week too! This is definitely one of your best stories.
1FreakishlyMeeThis is awesome! James is a bit mushy, but who doesnt love a mushy James? Anyway, the ending was genius. I LOVED it. Good luck with your exams, I have mine next week too! This is definitely one of your best stories.