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for A Terrible Date

2/26/2012 c1 Joanna
Well hello, I really hope you don't mind, but this is not going to be a very good review...

It was cute and all, but I think it's kind of a really shallow story. Kate would never feel that way about herself. She has too much spunk for that. She would have gotten angry and not have the whole "poor me" attitude. She also would not have paid for there meal. she would have stood up in the middle of it and would have told the guy off then would have left. Also, I think that Gibs would have done little things to make her feel better, not come right out and tell her that he was in love with her. He would have courted her first, doing small things here and there before maybe working up the guts to tell her how he felt.

But over all it's a nice concept.
2/26/2012 c1 dg101
Cute.:)

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