
4/23/2017 c1 MAP
Eeeeeeeeeee goood
Eeeeeeeeeee goood
11/29/2014 c1 Guest
I like all ur stories
I like all ur stories
2/6/2014 c1 undercoverauthor
this story is awesome i like the way she babbles
this story is awesome i like the way she babbles
6/7/2012 c1 Hailey
this story is soooooo cute! plz make ansequel 2 it! i luve it
this story is soooooo cute! plz make ansequel 2 it! i luve it
5/20/2012 c1 EkatGirl
awww…
awww…
3/10/2012 c1 Bob
Good Kinda confusing though
Good Kinda confusing though
2/28/2012 c1
9addicted2reading9
I thought you had to put something about unicorns existing or something... And shouldn't it be that Sinead and Amy were the only people, instead of thing? Or at least things... I'm not trying to be rude, as I so often point out, but to help improve the writing.

I thought you had to put something about unicorns existing or something... And shouldn't it be that Sinead and Amy were the only people, instead of thing? Or at least things... I'm not trying to be rude, as I so often point out, but to help improve the writing.
2/27/2012 c1 Icestar of shadowclan
Aaaawww I love Hamead 3 great job.
Aaaawww I love Hamead 3 great job.
2/26/2012 c1
7Giraffes4Ever
I absolutely Loved it. It's amazing. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. You have talent! I love the pairing, and the romance... :)

I absolutely Loved it. It's amazing. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. You have talent! I love the pairing, and the romance... :)
2/26/2012 c1 Rita Astur
Nice job. Love the cliche with no one else available but the one guy that she is in love with.
A couple of comments.."she fell backagainst the cushions.", needed a previous line with someone placing the cushions under her.
Anesthesia is usually applied during surgery or because they are going to do some procedure. For this story, you could use nitrous oxide (laughing gas) or some sort of pain killer to loosen Sinead's tongue.
All in all, it is really well done and I love the descriptive adjectives that you use. Keep up the good work.
Nice job. Love the cliche with no one else available but the one guy that she is in love with.
A couple of comments.."she fell backagainst the cushions.", needed a previous line with someone placing the cushions under her.
Anesthesia is usually applied during surgery or because they are going to do some procedure. For this story, you could use nitrous oxide (laughing gas) or some sort of pain killer to loosen Sinead's tongue.
All in all, it is really well done and I love the descriptive adjectives that you use. Keep up the good work.