for An Unfortunate Encounter With Johnny C10/10/2012 c2 
3ImmolationPiggieOfDoom
Well, hey! This is pretty great! :D I would definitely be happy if it didn't take you a year to update, but then again, I haven't updated any of my (lame) stories in about a year, so i suppose I'm not one to complain.
I really liked both chapters. The entire time though, I've been yelling in my head for her to start yelling at him herself, telling him it was the person across the street! She COMPLIMENTED him! Of course, He wouldn't end up believing her, without some really hard proof. And even then, he would probably kill her because hey, she was down there anyway.
This is really interesting. I can't wait to see more, hopefully soon.
The chapter was a little different than the first, in the respect that the shortness of it made it feel a tad rushed, but I feel like everything is rushed. I probably just read to fast.
Thanks for putting up the effort to get at least SOME of the idea out of your head! I have problems with that.
Anyway, loved the story, can't wait for more, thanks for writing, blah blah blah, toodles!
-Piggie
Embrace the Madness. It's all we have left.
3ImmolationPiggieOfDoomWell, hey! This is pretty great! :D I would definitely be happy if it didn't take you a year to update, but then again, I haven't updated any of my (lame) stories in about a year, so i suppose I'm not one to complain.
I really liked both chapters. The entire time though, I've been yelling in my head for her to start yelling at him herself, telling him it was the person across the street! She COMPLIMENTED him! Of course, He wouldn't end up believing her, without some really hard proof. And even then, he would probably kill her because hey, she was down there anyway.
This is really interesting. I can't wait to see more, hopefully soon.
The chapter was a little different than the first, in the respect that the shortness of it made it feel a tad rushed, but I feel like everything is rushed. I probably just read to fast.
Thanks for putting up the effort to get at least SOME of the idea out of your head! I have problems with that.
Anyway, loved the story, can't wait for more, thanks for writing, blah blah blah, toodles!
-Piggie
Embrace the Madness. It's all we have left.
8/16/2012 c1 Invader Bean
Aww! Wow! i really love this! It's brilliant writing and a very interesting story! Please, keep it up and update soon!
Aww! Wow! i really love this! It's brilliant writing and a very interesting story! Please, keep it up and update soon!
7/26/2012 c1 8Shadow the Ranger
Great start! But you failed to describe what your character looks like
8Shadow the RangerGreat start! But you failed to describe what your character looks like
6/22/2012 c1 Azy
I'm looking forward to more. I hope I see some soon.
The transitions were a little rough but they aren't horrible.
Favoriting this story. _
I'm looking forward to more. I hope I see some soon.
The transitions were a little rough but they aren't horrible.
Favoriting this story. _
6/22/2012 c1 Azy
I'm looking forward to more. I hope I see some soon.
The transitions were a little rough but they aren't horrible.
Favoriting this story. _
I'm looking forward to more. I hope I see some soon.
The transitions were a little rough but they aren't horrible.
Favoriting this story. _
3/2/2012 c1 2Lily the Master of Kitties
What, no reviews yet? Strange... Anyways, this is really interesting and well written. Can't wait to read more. :)
2Lily the Master of KittiesWhat, no reviews yet? Strange... Anyways, this is really interesting and well written. Can't wait to read more. :)