for Torikaeru7/1/2020 c40 Kurawastaken
Im a little late but this was a real joy to read. Rhank you for the good time
Im a little late but this was a real joy to read. Rhank you for the good time
3/19/2018 c40 Guest
This fic was awesome! I hope it continues some day.
This fic was awesome! I hope it continues some day.
1/28/2018 c40 SorceressEternityIII
Wish there was more chapters. I followed the story on the off chamce it ever has updates. Seeing as it's from 6 years ago, I'd say likely not. Hope you hadn't died, in any case!
Wish there was more chapters. I followed the story on the off chamce it ever has updates. Seeing as it's from 6 years ago, I'd say likely not. Hope you hadn't died, in any case!
8/9/2017 c1 TheOfficialDreamer
I am on verge of tearing up, reading this chapter.. Good job, though I can't help but feel so sad.
I am on verge of tearing up, reading this chapter.. Good job, though I can't help but feel so sad.
7/10/2017 c1 
1Ithebooklover
Is this fic "dead", as they say? I was having a lot of fun reading it, but why pray tell do you have to stop updating at the most crucial point of the story? Same goes with your other stories. Are you just facing a writer's block, or is this somehow your way of playing with us mere mortals? What have we done to deserve this!?
1IthebookloverIs this fic "dead", as they say? I was having a lot of fun reading it, but why pray tell do you have to stop updating at the most crucial point of the story? Same goes with your other stories. Are you just facing a writer's block, or is this somehow your way of playing with us mere mortals? What have we done to deserve this!?
5/14/2017 c40 justperson
WOW MATE YOUR STORY IS ACTUALLY VERRRYY AMAZINGG!
The plot flow, battle scenes, character development and characterization (even though Kakashi a bit off in some part, but well). I love Shikamaru the most.
And i don't know why, i got chills when i read this. Especially in the part when they found naruto's body and minato's dream in the forest.
BUT WHHYYYY YOU STILL DON'T UPDATE SINCE FOREVER! PLEASE DON'T ABANDONE IT!
WOW MATE YOUR STORY IS ACTUALLY VERRRYY AMAZINGG!
The plot flow, battle scenes, character development and characterization (even though Kakashi a bit off in some part, but well). I love Shikamaru the most.
And i don't know why, i got chills when i read this. Especially in the part when they found naruto's body and minato's dream in the forest.
BUT WHHYYYY YOU STILL DON'T UPDATE SINCE FOREVER! PLEASE DON'T ABANDONE IT!
9/19/2016 c8 Guest
DON'T YOU DARE CUT THOSE BANGS NAMIKAZE!
...
Well, I just found your story, and I'm in love. Its brilliant so far, I love the way you write Minato! Kakashi too, though I'm a bit sad Naruto is gone...
I'll keep reading as fast as I can!
~Gwen
DON'T YOU DARE CUT THOSE BANGS NAMIKAZE!
...
Well, I just found your story, and I'm in love. Its brilliant so far, I love the way you write Minato! Kakashi too, though I'm a bit sad Naruto is gone...
I'll keep reading as fast as I can!
~Gwen
3/31/2016 c40 6rothfyae
This is a really great story. In fact, I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more attention. Great work with it!
6rothfyaeThis is a really great story. In fact, I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more attention. Great work with it!
1/3/2016 c40 2Tyrannitor
Wow. What a fascinating concept. I never even imagined something like this, but the fact that you actually made a brilliant story out if it is beyond my mortal comprehension. Kudos to you. I hope that you update this story soon!
2TyrannitorWow. What a fascinating concept. I never even imagined something like this, but the fact that you actually made a brilliant story out if it is beyond my mortal comprehension. Kudos to you. I hope that you update this story soon!
10/11/2015 c3 1Tzipporrah
Doesn't Minato die after Rin? It goes
Obito (supposedly)
Rin
Minato/Kushina
1TzipporrahDoesn't Minato die after Rin? It goes
Obito (supposedly)
Rin
Minato/Kushina